Birthday Wishes: A New Day
Contest Entry: Multiple Tetractys33 total reviews
Comment from capraroj
An absolutely wonderful sentiment, sent to a friend with compassion and sympathy, and yet, with the heartfelt offering of hope that often means so much to someone in suffering.
Very nice.
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An absolutely wonderful sentiment, sent to a friend with compassion and sympathy, and yet, with the heartfelt offering of hope that often means so much to someone in suffering.
Very nice.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2008
Comment from Teri7
What a beautiful and heartfelt write you have done for this card. I know this came from your sweet heart. Great job. God bless and good luck. Teri
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What a beautiful and heartfelt write you have done for this card. I know this came from your sweet heart. Great job. God bless and good luck. Teri
Comment Written 27-Mar-2008
Comment from Nedrajean
This was a lovely sentiment and could be expressed in a card quite nicely. Your style was original and different - a challenge I'd guess. Good luck.
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This was a lovely sentiment and could be expressed in a card quite nicely. Your style was original and different - a challenge I'd guess. Good luck.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2008
Comment from babylonia
definitely made me smile and feel the warm fuzzies. easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. imagery is excellent. there are a lot of good ones here. definitely keep up the good work~
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definitely made me smile and feel the warm fuzzies. easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. imagery is excellent. there are a lot of good ones here. definitely keep up the good work~
Comment Written 27-Mar-2008
Comment from mmichelle97219
the big first without your other half are the hardest and solace is hard to find. Words fail when love is wounded and al you can do is be there for her. I thought this poem was just perfect.
Michelle
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the big first without your other half are the hardest and solace is hard to find. Words fail when love is wounded and al you can do is be there for her. I thought this poem was just perfect.
Michelle
Comment Written 20-Mar-2008
Comment from Wendyanne
Hi Mrs KT. This is a truly wonderful piece of well written oetry in multiple tetractys style. I'm sure your friend would have been very comforted by your beautiful words. Good luck
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Hi Mrs KT. This is a truly wonderful piece of well written oetry in multiple tetractys style. I'm sure your friend would have been very comforted by your beautiful words. Good luck
Comment Written 08-Mar-2008
Comment from mildredmolanki
Hi...well I think you made the challenge...this is very Hallmark, and would feel fitting for a card message. It is very long however...usually they are quite short and snappy...I guess people don't want to be reading anything too long. Kind regards.
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Hi...well I think you made the challenge...this is very Hallmark, and would feel fitting for a card message. It is very long however...usually they are quite short and snappy...I guess people don't want to be reading anything too long. Kind regards.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2008
Comment from Nanny 6
If I received this poem for my birthday, I would be honored to know that I had a true friend at my side. This was elequently written. Judy
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2008
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If I received this poem for my birthday, I would be honored to know that I had a true friend at my side. This was elequently written. Judy
Comment Written 08-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2008
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Bless you, Friend. I hope she felt that way, too....Thank you for the kind review...diane
Comment from Domino
hi Mrs KT
I think there's some lovely caring sincere and well thought out wishes here, to someone who'l feel special when reading it. Trouble for me is 'seeing' this pretty shape fitting onto one page - I can't, and to split it over more than one would lose it's estheticniss(spell?). I humbly believe it's not idealy suited to the guidlines, but what do I know? It's still a great write and good luck, Ray xx
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2008
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hi Mrs KT
I think there's some lovely caring sincere and well thought out wishes here, to someone who'l feel special when reading it. Trouble for me is 'seeing' this pretty shape fitting onto one page - I can't, and to split it over more than one would lose it's estheticniss(spell?). I humbly believe it's not idealy suited to the guidlines, but what do I know? It's still a great write and good luck, Ray xx
Comment Written 08-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2008
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Hi Ray: Glad you stopped by. Oh....those Hallmark folk have come up with some amazingly new and creative ways to make cards these days: bifold, trifold, you name it - so the presentation would work. diane
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Hi Mrs Kt, I'm pleased cos yours deserves the best. Just shows how out of touch this Brit is. To be honest, I'd never heard of 'Hallmark 'till spotted contest, but spose we'll catch up. As i said, yours was really nice, best wishes, Ray xx
Comment from Artasylum
perfectly penned and it was so beautifully stated and i send my love and blessings to your friend too...it's the hardest thing to lose a spouse and nothing ever makes it leave you go on and day by day you learn to cope with the loss but they will always be with you just a step behind...yours, diana
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perfectly penned and it was so beautifully stated and i send my love and blessings to your friend too...it's the hardest thing to lose a spouse and nothing ever makes it leave you go on and day by day you learn to cope with the loss but they will always be with you just a step behind...yours, diana
Comment Written 07-Mar-2008
