Solar Rainbows
An imaginary Solar Rainbow20 total reviews
Comment from Lady & Louis
Helvi, what a superb piece - and kudos to you for the digital art that inspired it! (It's great fun to do poems inspired by one's own art, isn't it?)
I love the images in this, the rainbows and dragons and the sheer vibrancy of life. It makes me think of matter far outside our physical realm - I wouldn't be at all surprised to find that other dimensions do indeed have such wonderful things!
The wording is spot on, there are no errors or anything to suggest, except perhaps a more contrasting font - on my screen it does tend to blend a bit with the background.
Cheers,
LL :)
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Helvi, what a superb piece - and kudos to you for the digital art that inspired it! (It's great fun to do poems inspired by one's own art, isn't it?)
I love the images in this, the rainbows and dragons and the sheer vibrancy of life. It makes me think of matter far outside our physical realm - I wouldn't be at all surprised to find that other dimensions do indeed have such wonderful things!
The wording is spot on, there are no errors or anything to suggest, except perhaps a more contrasting font - on my screen it does tend to blend a bit with the background.
Cheers,
LL :)
Comment Written 02-Mar-2008
Comment from VICTIMEYES
this was a good imagination and vision for your solar dreams, the flow is good and the words were great for all the imagery you created, nice write.
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this was a good imagination and vision for your solar dreams, the flow is good and the words were great for all the imagery you created, nice write.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2008
Comment from Pili Pubul
What an original and very visual poem of rainbows in outer space ! I love the perfect style and your talented imagination . Simply delightful !
There is a place past starlit nights
Where hues flow into streams
Within the realms of distant space
A solar rainbow gleams
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2008
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What an original and very visual poem of rainbows in outer space ! I love the perfect style and your talented imagination . Simply delightful !
There is a place past starlit nights
Where hues flow into streams
Within the realms of distant space
A solar rainbow gleams
Comment Written 02-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2008
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Hi Pili,
Thank you so much for your wonderful compliments. It is a joy to receive your wonderful review. I'm so glad you enjoy my work.
Hugs,
Helvi :o)
Comment from daimaou
Excellent ryhme and excellent metering. The imagery is very vivid. Excellent poem.
While I was reading your poem, I could seen in my mind's eyes the myriad of colors conjured up.
Well done.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2008
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Excellent ryhme and excellent metering. The imagery is very vivid. Excellent poem.
While I was reading your poem, I could seen in my mind's eyes the myriad of colors conjured up.
Well done.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2008
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Hi daimaou,
I glad you saw the imagery as vivid because that is what I was hoping for.I'm very happy you enjoyed my poem and appreciate the great review.
Thank you so much,
Helvi :o)
Comment from thecopyhouse
Very interesting idea of a rainbow in Outer Space. I liked the imagery and celestial word choice--very fitting-- as well as the flow of the poem. Great rhythm throughout. Nice work, and thanks for sharing! Cheers, Laura
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2008
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Very interesting idea of a rainbow in Outer Space. I liked the imagery and celestial word choice--very fitting-- as well as the flow of the poem. Great rhythm throughout. Nice work, and thanks for sharing! Cheers, Laura
Comment Written 02-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2008
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Hi Laura,
I thought that somewhere in Outer Space there must be something that resembles a rainbow, so I tried to think what it would be like. I'm so glad you liked the vision I created. Thank you for the great review.
Bless You,
Helvi :o)
Comment from Just2Write
It would be wonderful if there was such a space. Your poem is perfect and the idea of a solar rainbow is delightful. The poem flow is flawless. Lovely write.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2008
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It would be wonderful if there was such a space. Your poem is perfect and the idea of a solar rainbow is delightful. The poem flow is flawless. Lovely write.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2008
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Hi 2Flower,
WOW! You reviewed this with blinders. You were'nt aware of the poet's identity. Knowing you liked the poem without being aware of the writer makes this review very special. Thank you for the lovely review.
Bless You,
Helvi :o)
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I often PREFER blinders. That way the work stands or falls on its own without the prejudice of knowing who the author is. It should not make any difference what-so-ever. Good is good and bad is bad. As poets, we all are capable of writing both.
I agree! That is why your review means so much.
Thank You
Helvi :o)
Comment from Juana
Loved it. As a fan of astrophysics, you conjured up images of nebula and exploding star systems, which I did enjoy. The image is nice too. Thanks for sharing your poem.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2008
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Loved it. As a fan of astrophysics, you conjured up images of nebula and exploding star systems, which I did enjoy. The image is nice too. Thanks for sharing your poem.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2008
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Hi Juana,
Knowing that you are a fan of astrophtsics and enjoyed my poem makes your review even more special. Thank you so much for your kind words.
Helvi :o)
Comment from TomandOma
This is beautiful, with the colors, lights and splendid inflorescence very visual to the reader. The vocabulary is beguiling, also.
I have only one suggestion:
Your meter and cadence seem perfect to me except in the next to the last line:
There is a place past starlit nights
Where hues flow into streams
**In the realms of distant space
A solar rainbow gleams
**
Perhaps change 'In' to 'Within'?
Your artwork is very colorful, also, and made me remember my mother bundling us kids up to go out and see the Northern Lights.
Thank you!
Doris
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2008
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This is beautiful, with the colors, lights and splendid inflorescence very visual to the reader. The vocabulary is beguiling, also.
I have only one suggestion:
Your meter and cadence seem perfect to me except in the next to the last line:
There is a place past starlit nights
Where hues flow into streams
**In the realms of distant space
A solar rainbow gleams
**
Perhaps change 'In' to 'Within'?
Your artwork is very colorful, also, and made me remember my mother bundling us kids up to go out and see the Northern Lights.
Thank you!
Doris
Comment Written 02-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2008
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Hi Doris,
I've seen the Northen Lights several times, but only once in color.I thought they were beautiful and was fasinated by there awesome display. I wanted this poem to reflect what I saw and create a rainbow that actually flared. I'm so happy you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for the fantastic review,
Helvi :o)
Comment from RossJM
What a beautiful poem!
I absolutely loved it. Especially the last two stanzas:
?And then the opalescent flares
Ignite with their reply
To decorate and recreate
Incinerated sky
There is a place past starlit nights
Where hues flow into streams
In the realms of distant space
A solar rainbow gleams
Excellent!
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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2008
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What a beautiful poem!
I absolutely loved it. Especially the last two stanzas:
?And then the opalescent flares
Ignite with their reply
To decorate and recreate
Incinerated sky
There is a place past starlit nights
Where hues flow into streams
In the realms of distant space
A solar rainbow gleams
Excellent!
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2008
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Hi Ross,
Thank you for the lovely review for "Solar Rainbows." I am so glad you enjoyed the intergalactic journey.
Helvi :o)
Comment from Artasylum
well i want to go to the place where hues flow into the streams and flow into distant space...let me live to see the solar rainbow gleam and live another day..yours, diana
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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2008
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well i want to go to the place where hues flow into the streams and flow into distant space...let me live to see the solar rainbow gleam and live another day..yours, diana
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Comment Written 02-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2008
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Hi Diana, Your review is the first one I've received. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. If my imaginary image is something you'd really like to see, I must have done something right. Thank you for the wonderful compliment Bless you, Helvi :o)
