Solar Rainbows
An imaginary Solar Rainbow20 total reviews
Comment from AwareOne
Absolutely an enticing poem with rich imagery. The rhythm flows superbly and correctly. There is much talent here. Imagery and clarity and downright brilliance abound. Thank you for such a poem!
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2008
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Absolutely an enticing poem with rich imagery. The rhythm flows superbly and correctly. There is much talent here. Imagery and clarity and downright brilliance abound. Thank you for such a poem!
Comment Written 05-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2008
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Hi AwareOne,
I'm so glad you were aware of my poem. WOW!!! Thank you so much for your overwhelming and kind response. I am thrilled you enjoyed it.
Helvi :o)
Comment from Norzah
A beautiful poem rich in sunburst imageries, patterns and colors filling in the galaxy of the solar system and the galaxy of human imagination. The cosmic energy display is fantastic 'As prisms burst and seem to spawn/Rich myriads of beams/...And then the opalescent flares/Ignite with their reply/To decorate and recreate/Incenerted sky.' I love the galactic dragons
imagery, flauting their breath of fire in the sky. Vivid, hectic and full of energy.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2008
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A beautiful poem rich in sunburst imageries, patterns and colors filling in the galaxy of the solar system and the galaxy of human imagination. The cosmic energy display is fantastic 'As prisms burst and seem to spawn/Rich myriads of beams/...And then the opalescent flares/Ignite with their reply/To decorate and recreate/Incenerted sky.' I love the galactic dragons
imagery, flauting their breath of fire in the sky. Vivid, hectic and full of energy.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2008
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2008
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Hi Nozrah,
WOW! Compliments....compliments and more compliments, thank you so much. I am overwhelmed and honored, but most of all I am incredibly happy you liked what I wrote. Thank you for the fantastic review. :o)
Helvi :o)
Comment from ladybug49
You deserve a extra special rating. The picture is absolutely mind blowing and the poem fits in perfectly. Your poem flows from verse to verse very easily. The rhyming is great. It is a easy poem to read and one that shows what a creative imagination you have.
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You deserve a extra special rating. The picture is absolutely mind blowing and the poem fits in perfectly. Your poem flows from verse to verse very easily. The rhyming is great. It is a easy poem to read and one that shows what a creative imagination you have.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2008
Comment from Teri7
This is truly beautiful. You are very creative and I know you love taking pictures. This was a great poem with wonderful art work. Your wording was magical and the imagery was "out of this world". Love, Teri
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This is truly beautiful. You are very creative and I know you love taking pictures. This was a great poem with wonderful art work. Your wording was magical and the imagery was "out of this world". Love, Teri
Comment Written 03-Mar-2008
Comment from Wendyanne
Wow Helvi. You have used a fantastic picture to enhance your piece of fantasy poetry. I love the idea of a solar rainbow. Awesome
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Wow Helvi. You have used a fantastic picture to enhance your piece of fantasy poetry. I love the idea of a solar rainbow. Awesome
Comment Written 03-Mar-2008
Comment from Focused True North
There is a place past starlit nights
Where hues flow into streams
Within the realms of distant space
A solar rainbow gleams
What a beautiful image you've presented with this poetry. It stirs the imagination, and has been a delight to read!
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There is a place past starlit nights
Where hues flow into streams
Within the realms of distant space
A solar rainbow gleams
What a beautiful image you've presented with this poetry. It stirs the imagination, and has been a delight to read!
Comment Written 03-Mar-2008
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
Helvi2, your profile speaks of your love of creating things. This picture is stunning. The accompanying poem sparks the reader's imagination to wonder, with you, if there are rainbows in outer space. We will all have to watch more closely when the space shuttles send pictures back to earth to determine if there just might be. Good job.
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Helvi2, your profile speaks of your love of creating things. This picture is stunning. The accompanying poem sparks the reader's imagination to wonder, with you, if there are rainbows in outer space. We will all have to watch more closely when the space shuttles send pictures back to earth to determine if there just might be. Good job.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2008
Comment from boberto
Hi there Helvi2 Very well done--especially if you have never been real close to the Northern Lights. I have seen the midnight sun and often witnessed the Northern Lights having spent 18 months about 400 miles north of the Artic Circle.
boberto
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Hi there Helvi2 Very well done--especially if you have never been real close to the Northern Lights. I have seen the midnight sun and often witnessed the Northern Lights having spent 18 months about 400 miles north of the Artic Circle.
boberto
Comment Written 02-Mar-2008
Comment from marswolf
This is simply incredible...
the flow, the rhythm, the rhyme, read as magically as the images...
Every verse was like an enchanting dream...I loved it all !
Thank you for sharing this...my dreams tonight will be inspired I'm sure...
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This is simply incredible...
the flow, the rhythm, the rhyme, read as magically as the images...
Every verse was like an enchanting dream...I loved it all !
Thank you for sharing this...my dreams tonight will be inspired I'm sure...
Comment Written 02-Mar-2008
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Helvi, so nice to see you posting again. Missed you.
I have a very interesting book of the solar system with pictures. You poem with wonderful rhyme very is detailed and well written images of our solar system
Bravo
Gert
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Hello Helvi, so nice to see you posting again. Missed you.
I have a very interesting book of the solar system with pictures. You poem with wonderful rhyme very is detailed and well written images of our solar system
Bravo
Gert
Comment Written 02-Mar-2008
