Comment from Judian James

Excellent

This is a very charming, endearing piece. Writing a letter to the moon, hoping for a little help in the romance department!

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2008

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2008

Thanks Judian, yes, I desperately need help in that department!
Love
Pupa

reply by Judian James on 13-Jan-2008

Just keep writing those letters!!

Comment from P1

Excellent

pups this is truly beautiful
such heart felt words of longing
and wishing upon a moon which is a star
you told this very delicately and with
great feeling and it was a joy to read.
hugs lynda.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2008

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2008

Thanks lynda for your continuous encouraging reviews.
I appreciate them very much.
Glad you liked this one.
Love
Pupa

Comment from rivki1111

Excellent

Hello, this is beautiful poetry, classically lovely imagery with a fluid flow. I noticed no errors and the poem is published to perfection. I don't rate on the publishing choices though, i rate on the words and emotions that come through the poem...and this has it all. bye for now, and thanks for sharing your writing, rebekah

p.s. nice new bio...it is great to put a face to the name Pupa, I'm still working on mine.....I hope to have it ready by next Chanukkah, ehehehehe

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 Comment Written 12-Jan-2008

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2008

Rebekah, what a lovely review, thank you so much for your great encouragament and very kind comments.
So, may I ask when the next Chanukkah would be??
Love
Pupa

reply by rivki1111 on 12-Jan-2008

Around the same time Christians celebrates Christmas. We actually have a tree though, don't tell anyone, it was one of those concessions I made with my children because, all the kids in the class had a tree and all the trimmings that kids love, and my kinder wanted to fit in, be like the other kids.. we all do to some extent....riv

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a beautiful poem you have penned. I love the art work you chose for this beautiful poem. Great job my friend. My beautiful friend. Love, Teri

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2008

Teri, sweet friend, thanks for your continuous encouraging reviews and very sweet words. I hope you are reasonably feeling better.
Love
Pupa