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Addressing different themes in a form of a letter

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Comment from neiva
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Very creative, no changes are needed.
like the way you made your words rhymed.
easy to follow
fun to read. relaxing too,
great job,
neiva

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2008

reply by the author on 15-Jan-2008
    Neiva, I'm so glad you liked my poem.
    Thanks for a great review and kind rating.
    Love
    Pupa
Comment from Norzah
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A very romantic and appealing poem calling on the magic of the silver moon to let 'The power of your silver shine..touch me one more time..(and)
whisper all those words that sound, like a miracle so profound,' The second verse is very...moving and telling: it's not for lack of romance that the poet's heart remains empty but. '..I wouldn't dare to start/and ask you for a new romance../unless I'm absolutely sure, that you're my last and only cure.' The cautiousness is indicative of a very discreet nature.

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2008

reply by the author on 15-Jan-2008
    Norzah, so glad you liked my poem. Your reviews and comments are always very encouraging and appreciated. I thank for that.
    Love
    Pupa
Comment from davidray
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Hi there, pupa.
So good to see your picture of you now.
This poem is absolutely beautiful. Isn't it so true that the presence of the moon signifies romance and love? Your words have eloquently illustrated this point.Thanks for sharing. :)
Always, David

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2008

reply by the author on 15-Jan-2008
    Hi David,
    Thanks for a great review, just hope I get an answer soon!
    Love
    Pupa
Comment from Wendyanne
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Hi Pupa. What a truly beautiful piece of well written poetry in which you speak to the moon. Awesome imagery throughout this poem

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2008

reply by the author on 14-Jan-2008
    Thank you so much Wendyanne, for always encouraging and supporting me.
    Love
    Pupa
Comment from Martie
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Dear PUPA

A lovely idea...to write to the moon. I guess the portent that we give her is really the grand and glorious design of our own heart...especially when it is longing for love. Enjoyed! :)

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2008

reply by the author on 14-Jan-2008
    Thanks Martie for your support and always nice comments.
    Your encouragement means a lot to me.
    Love
    Pupa
Comment from T.S.J.
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This poem flowed so very well, it couldn't have flowed any better if it were a radging river in search of the falls. The love that ooozes from this very lovely poem is amazing. This written well poem is by far one of the best poems i've read yet. T.S.J.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2008

reply by the author on 14-Jan-2008
    T.S.J., I love to read your reviews as they are so loving and sweet.
    Thank you so much my friend. I really appreciate every word you say.
    Love
    Pupa
Comment from justmade
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Waiting on the moon dear Pupa, i hope it answers you.
I like the wnat and desire this has. It's captivating in a way.
Well done my friend.
Much love,
Justmade.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2008

reply by the author on 14-Jan-2008
    Hope I won't have to wait forever, Justmade!
    Thanks for a most encouraging review and kind rating.
    Glad you liked my poem.
    Love
    Pupa
Comment from BellaSpirit
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Pupa,

This is lovely and I'm sure the moon has heard several pleas as it glows above all the hearts below. This is unique and very pretty.

Pamelia

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2008

reply by the author on 14-Jan-2008
    Pamelia,
    Thanks for your encouraging comments and kind rating.
    Love
    Pupa
Comment from cecil
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A good poem with a fast even flow to the read. The beautiful moon always helping romance to grow was a wonderful thought that came through for me!

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2008

reply by the author on 14-Jan-2008
    Cecil, thank you so very much for your encouraging and kind review. Glad you liked it.
    Love
    Pupa
Comment from Scarlettdreams
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It sure would be nice if the moon could talk. Oh the stories she could tell. smiles. Such lovely verse penned here. Well done. Bravo Bravo

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2008

reply by the author on 14-Jan-2008
    Scarlettdreams, thank you so very much for a most encouraging and kind review. Glad you liked it.
    Love
    Pupa