Dear Life
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Dear 'Liking'"Addressing different themes in a form of a letter
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Comment from Polly_Pisces
I cannot let go of the passion, the desire, no matter what. In such a relationship, you will be missing. -Aye Pisces, I love what yer have written here, it's so heart-felt and meaningful.
Sincerity and clarity emoting as honesty, beautiful and exceptional.
Swim on Pisces...
Loves, Polly
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2007
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I cannot let go of the passion, the desire, no matter what. In such a relationship, you will be missing. -Aye Pisces, I love what yer have written here, it's so heart-felt and meaningful.
Sincerity and clarity emoting as honesty, beautiful and exceptional.
Swim on Pisces...
Loves, Polly
Comment Written 05-Dec-2007
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2007
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Polly, what a pleasant surprise, very generous of you my dear friend. Appreciate your support and encouragement and your kind comments.
Thanks again Pisces.
Love you
Pupa
Comment from ledford
I liked this but found some SPAG you might want to fix...
"If I had a choice, I would prefer to choose you" period needed here.
"Of course love is very important" should be "Of course, love is very important."
"wonderful thing called love" period needed here
Keep up the good work!
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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2007
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I liked this but found some SPAG you might want to fix...
"If I had a choice, I would prefer to choose you" period needed here.
"Of course love is very important" should be "Of course, love is very important."
"wonderful thing called love" period needed here
Keep up the good work!
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Comment Written 04-Dec-2007
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2007
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Thanks for your review and suggestions.
Pupa
Comment from mtngalofnc
Hi PUPA,
Such a unique letter you have written. Your first paragraph says a lot. There must have been a very deep hurt at some time and it almost sounds as if due to this hurt you are afraid to love, but are more in love with the idea of being in love. It is safer that way.
Thank you for sharing this well written letter with us. God bless and best wishes!
mtngalofnc
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2007
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Hi PUPA,
Such a unique letter you have written. Your first paragraph says a lot. There must have been a very deep hurt at some time and it almost sounds as if due to this hurt you are afraid to love, but are more in love with the idea of being in love. It is safer that way.
Thank you for sharing this well written letter with us. God bless and best wishes!
mtngalofnc
Comment Written 04-Dec-2007
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2007
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You are right, the hurt made me think that way. Glad you liked it.
Thanks for that great review and rating.
Pupa
Comment from rivki1111
Hello Pupa...very different and creative...well done!! I loved the publishing and the format you have chosen. It works well and i saw no errors, and have no suggestion for making this better, thanks for sharing it, rivki
p.s. All about that confusing state called 'love'.....i would run a mile while you still have the chance, heheheehe
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2007
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Hello Pupa...very different and creative...well done!! I loved the publishing and the format you have chosen. It works well and i saw no errors, and have no suggestion for making this better, thanks for sharing it, rivki
p.s. All about that confusing state called 'love'.....i would run a mile while you still have the chance, heheheehe
Comment Written 04-Dec-2007
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2007
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Hi Rebekah,
I will keep on running my friend. I want my peace now.
Thanks for a great review and kind rating. Glad you liked it.
Pupa
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute write you have done my friend. I enjoyed the art work you chose as it fit so well with this poem. Great job as always. God bless. Hugs, Teri
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2007
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This is a very cute write you have done my friend. I enjoyed the art work you chose as it fit so well with this poem. Great job as always. God bless. Hugs, Teri
Comment Written 04-Dec-2007
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2007
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Thanks Teri, I appreciate your stopping by to review and appreciate the kind rating.
Love
Pupa
Comment from makata
Your art of personification stood out in your poetry. It conveys a thought of not being hasty with love, for haste makes waste. "Liking" is a stepping stone to love, so it's a must to have it. It's a very timely thought since a lot of humans fall into trap of "just falling in love" ending in nothing. Keep posting similar literaries. Good job!
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2007
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Your art of personification stood out in your poetry. It conveys a thought of not being hasty with love, for haste makes waste. "Liking" is a stepping stone to love, so it's a must to have it. It's a very timely thought since a lot of humans fall into trap of "just falling in love" ending in nothing. Keep posting similar literaries. Good job!
Comment Written 04-Dec-2007
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2007
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Thanks for the great review and kind rating. I am so glad you liked it.
Pupa
Comment from Janilou
Fascinating! I really enjoyed reading this and I think I could have used the help of "liking" a few times in the past, but oh, well, too late now!
Very clever. No mistakes seen here at all!
Well done.
Jan
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2007
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Fascinating! I really enjoyed reading this and I think I could have used the help of "liking" a few times in the past, but oh, well, too late now!
Very clever. No mistakes seen here at all!
Well done.
Jan
Comment Written 04-Dec-2007
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2007
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Jan, I am so glad you liked my letter, yes sometimes it is too late, but with age we 'might' get a little wiser...
Thanks for the great review and rating.
Pupa
Comment from diane24
Dear Pupa,
totally love this. You have made this
prose such a poetic rendition that I
am torn between wanting to believe the
story and enjoy the poetry. Wonderful
diane
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2007
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Dear Pupa,
totally love this. You have made this
prose such a poetic rendition that I
am torn between wanting to believe the
story and enjoy the poetry. Wonderful
diane
Comment Written 04-Dec-2007
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2007
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Diane, so glad you liked it, thanks for your lovely review and rating.
Try to believe and enjoy same time.hahaha
Pupa
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello PUPA, Oh this is very interesting prose poem.
I would like to say you must like someone before you truly know them if you really love them
You have some amazing thoughts here--
Dear "Liking",
If I had a choice, I would prefer to choose you, honestly I would, because I find you more genuine than love.
Looks like someone rally got hurt!
gert
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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2007
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Hello PUPA, Oh this is very interesting prose poem.
I would like to say you must like someone before you truly know them if you really love them
You have some amazing thoughts here--
Dear "Liking",
If I had a choice, I would prefer to choose you, honestly I would, because I find you more genuine than love.
Looks like someone rally got hurt!
gert
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Comment Written 04-Dec-2007
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2007
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Hi Gert, well we should learn of our mistakes and through experience.
I just need to learn not to believe everything that is said.
Thanks for reviewing and for your kind comments and rating.
Pupa
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PUPA ,You are so welcome.
Gert
