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Comment from NaughtieScribe
"that small amount required", instead of smallest amount required. Your story was well written, fast paced, and read with a realistic conversational style. Nice job.
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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2008
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"that small amount required", instead of smallest amount required. Your story was well written, fast paced, and read with a realistic conversational style. Nice job.
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Comment Written 06-Jan-2008
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2008
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Thank you my friend. God bless. Teri
Comment from Norzah
Faith is indeed a small word that's as ethereal in it's meaning as the heavens. You can see the sky from anywhere in the world, sun or shine, night or day. The question is; can the sky see you? And if it does will it let you know. The instances of faith at work as you related, Teri7, are instances of the sky seeing you and letting you know about it. It would certainly make you shine like the sun. God bless.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2008
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Faith is indeed a small word that's as ethereal in it's meaning as the heavens. You can see the sky from anywhere in the world, sun or shine, night or day. The question is; can the sky see you? And if it does will it let you know. The instances of faith at work as you related, Teri7, are instances of the sky seeing you and letting you know about it. It would certainly make you shine like the sun. God bless.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2008
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2008
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Thank you my friend. God bless. Hugs, Teri
Comment from empire76
The thing about faith is that it's so random. What determines how anyone would be affected by any event.
-In the Bible it says faith the size of a mustard seed.
I think you might have a bigger impact if you complete the line as in faith like a ustard seed...move mountains. I think it gives more substance to your argument
-The song I sung was [a song] my aunt used to sing.
song sung sing...phew
how about you change (a song) to ONE?
I like the little-things angle you chose. I have not entered this contest myself coz I was thinking of it in terms of devine intervention type of event/story...
Empi
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2008
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The thing about faith is that it's so random. What determines how anyone would be affected by any event.
-In the Bible it says faith the size of a mustard seed.
I think you might have a bigger impact if you complete the line as in faith like a ustard seed...move mountains. I think it gives more substance to your argument
-The song I sung was [a song] my aunt used to sing.
song sung sing...phew
how about you change (a song) to ONE?
I like the little-things angle you chose. I have not entered this contest myself coz I was thinking of it in terms of devine intervention type of event/story...
Empi
Comment Written 04-Jan-2008
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2008
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This was what I thought of at the time. I have seen miracles but due to having an MS epiisode I didn't think about all of them. God bless. Teri
Comment from Korton
This is a well written story involving faith at a personal level that moves, motivates and rewards. There are quite a number of stories in this contest and this one stands among the best. Very well done.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2008
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This is a well written story involving faith at a personal level that moves, motivates and rewards. There are quite a number of stories in this contest and this one stands among the best. Very well done.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2008
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2008
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Thank you my friend. Hugs, Teri
Comment from babylonia
this is a really nice read. it is easy to read and follow. i see no spag. the rhythm and flow are smooth. i don't know what to say. keep up the good writing~
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2008
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this is a really nice read. it is easy to read and follow. i see no spag. the rhythm and flow are smooth. i don't know what to say. keep up the good writing~
Comment Written 02-Jan-2008
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2008
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Thank you my friend. Love, Teri
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you are welcome~
love,
barbara
ps
i am a night person. the sun goes down and i liven up. i have been all of my life. like a vampire when the sun comes up my body wants to sleep. i have a daughter just like me. i have learned if i want to do something early in the morning i need to not go to sleep. it seems the rest of the world expects a 9 to 5. oh well.
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I totally understand. I worked at the police department and it got me all screwed up. I loved working the midnight shift.
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i have done a couple of different paper routes. i loved it. i would tell people i am a night person. the grocery stores were open 24 hours. i did my shopping when i got off work. it was wonderful. hope you are having a good day~
barbara/babylonia
Comment from Veronica Grace
A wonderful story of faith and the outcome of trusting Jesus. And the blessing is in having read this heartfelt story. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2008
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A wonderful story of faith and the outcome of trusting Jesus. And the blessing is in having read this heartfelt story. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2008
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2008
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Thank you my friend. God bless. Hugs, Teri
Comment from Annmuma
Your faith shows through loud and clear in your essay. Saw no spag issues and I enjoyed the read. Good luck in the contest. ann
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2008
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Your faith shows through loud and clear in your essay. Saw no spag issues and I enjoyed the read. Good luck in the contest. ann
Comment Written 02-Jan-2008
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2008
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Thank you Ann. God bless you. Love, Teri
Comment from Claudia Barrington
Great testimony Teri7. Hey, here's a little seed I am planting in your mind for whenever...There is a preacher named Nasir Sisikki (I think I spelled it right). he was a Muslim and got saved. Anyway, he has a website and I see him on TV sometimes. Well, his wife had MS, and you should get a copy of his testimony concerning her complete and total healing. It is amazing. Thanks for sharing, Claudia
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2008
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Great testimony Teri7. Hey, here's a little seed I am planting in your mind for whenever...There is a preacher named Nasir Sisikki (I think I spelled it right). he was a Muslim and got saved. Anyway, he has a website and I see him on TV sometimes. Well, his wife had MS, and you should get a copy of his testimony concerning her complete and total healing. It is amazing. Thanks for sharing, Claudia
Comment Written 01-Jan-2008
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2008
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Thank you Cladia. I will look that up. I know that God is healing me, it's just in his time,not mine. I appreciate you telling me this. God bless and much love, Teri
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Teri7, God showed both he and his wife NUTRITIONAL keys to healing, but in a supernatural way...you MUST get your hands on their testimony. Claudia
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I truly believe that my friend.
Comment from Blaidd Drwg
Teri, this blessed me today, thank you. I have read most of the contest entries, and they are incredible. I feel bad that only one can win - they are all winners in my book.
Teri, you truly are an inspiration. God Bless you. You are one of His special daughters - which reminds me, I think one of the coolest things about God, is that of all the names we call Him, the one He likes best, I think, is Father.
John
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2008
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Teri, this blessed me today, thank you. I have read most of the contest entries, and they are incredible. I feel bad that only one can win - they are all winners in my book.
Teri, you truly are an inspiration. God Bless you. You are one of His special daughters - which reminds me, I think one of the coolest things about God, is that of all the names we call Him, the one He likes best, I think, is Father.
John
Comment Written 01-Jan-2008
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2008
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Thank you John. You made me smile finally today. God bless you always my friend. Hugs, Teri
Comment from The Cajun
Well written. Interesting story.
Faith is a strange thing. It seems simple for you. For me it is more difficult. Seeing is believing. Sometimes I have doubts.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2008
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Well written. Interesting story.
Faith is a strange thing. It seems simple for you. For me it is more difficult. Seeing is believing. Sometimes I have doubts.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2008
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2008
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You are absolutely right my friend. That is why we don't see more miracles. Thank you for ther review. God bless and Happy New Year. Hugs, Teri
