Dear Life
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Dear Wall"Addressing different themes in a form of a letter
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Comment from experimentalpoet
LOL.....my son used to get so upset that i didn't have curtains on my kitchen windows - he said mom...people might see you...what if you don't have a shirt on...??? I said my son...if someone is staring at me...and doesn't turn away...it is a compliment at my age...LOL...
My neighbor used to come down and say - I heard you all alone in there...:) nice job...creative and unique....(you may want to up the font a bit...for old eyes like mine it was a little hard to read..and some might skip it w/o their glasses )...just a thought...much love my friend..brenda
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LOL.....my son used to get so upset that i didn't have curtains on my kitchen windows - he said mom...people might see you...what if you don't have a shirt on...??? I said my son...if someone is staring at me...and doesn't turn away...it is a compliment at my age...LOL...
My neighbor used to come down and say - I heard you all alone in there...:) nice job...creative and unique....(you may want to up the font a bit...for old eyes like mine it was a little hard to read..and some might skip it w/o their glasses )...just a thought...much love my friend..brenda
Comment Written 14-Nov-2007
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2007
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Brenda, thanks for always supporting my writing and for the kind rating.
I appreciate your advice regarding the font, will see to it.
Pupa
Comment from Maria-LouiseOD
Absolutley fabulous :) ............................................................................................................................ if I was a gay man I'd flap :) loved it.
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Absolutley fabulous :) ............................................................................................................................ if I was a gay man I'd flap :) loved it.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2007
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2007
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Wow, that is very very generous of you. I truly appreciate it very much. Glad you liked my poem.
Pupa
Comment from rhymer1
Aceptable free verse anda well delivered thought(s). Do I detect a bit of the chiding of a deity for abandoning his flock? Nice to see someone who can make free verse seem more like poetry than most contributors an the site. slainte, rhymer1
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Aceptable free verse anda well delivered thought(s). Do I detect a bit of the chiding of a deity for abandoning his flock? Nice to see someone who can make free verse seem more like poetry than most contributors an the site. slainte, rhymer1
Comment Written 14-Nov-2007
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2007
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Thank you so much for such a kind and encouraging review and rating. Most appreciated. Glad you liked it.
Pupa
Comment from Annmuma
Well written and hauntingly true. Good flow and the imagery was superb. The entire presentation was well done. Enjoyed the poem. ann
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Well written and hauntingly true. Good flow and the imagery was superb. The entire presentation was well done. Enjoyed the poem. ann
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Comment Written 14-Nov-2007
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Ann, I appreciate very much your encouraging and kind review and rating.
Glad you liked it.
Pupa
Comment from Honus X Heppablatte
Snowy and lilting, this falls out of the sky like an eulogy for something big that's dwindling softly. A maudlin tapestry that speaks open and frankly; opting for strong reality over leafy bulbous metaphor,this is an unflinching look into the mirror of pain, self doubt and slowly fading mirth. Small feet falling on crunchy snow ,you really waded through the mire of life to get to the cabin and these words you have written show it!
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Snowy and lilting, this falls out of the sky like an eulogy for something big that's dwindling softly. A maudlin tapestry that speaks open and frankly; opting for strong reality over leafy bulbous metaphor,this is an unflinching look into the mirror of pain, self doubt and slowly fading mirth. Small feet falling on crunchy snow ,you really waded through the mire of life to get to the cabin and these words you have written show it!
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Comment Written 14-Nov-2007
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2007
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My very dear friend, I have to use my dictionary when I review your poems. Now I will need it even when you review mine. I honestly applaud your use of language and appreciate very much. Thanks for a lovely and again encouraging review.
Pupa
