Comment from Wendyanne

Excellent

Hi PUPA. This is a very interesting piece of poetry you have written about the existence of a wall between 2 very lonely people. Very thought-provoking

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2007

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2007

Thanks Wendyanne for stopping by and reviewing my work. Glad you liked this poem.
Pupa

Comment from daisyfly

Excellent

This is a really celver piece - a very unique take on something that - really - we never pay any attention to. This was very creative, and I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2007

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2007

I am glad you enjoyed this poem. Thank you for your vey kind review and rating.
Pupar

Comment from Polly_Pisces

Excellent

I look at you standing between them, hate you, wishing
you were invisible, --Wow Pisces, this is such a unique verse, I love what you have written here. Truly creative and so moving.

You are juss lovely, indeed.

Take care, Pollyanna

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2007

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2007

Thanks Pisces, glad you liked it, means a lot to me. Your comments are encouraging and much appreciated.
Hope you are feeling better.
Love you
Pupa

Comment from mrscutiepie

Excellent

this was really good to read how you delivered the poem
in some good words, all come together very well in this one.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2007

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2007

Thanks for the great review and kind rating. Much appreciated.
Glad you liked it.
Pupa

Comment from Jer4Clarity

Excellent

Pupa,

Yes sometimes the very things that were designed to keep up safe or protect us from the unfriendly can do the exact opposite. If walls were transparent that would be very revealing...oh that was a pun.

~(;) Jer
Lover of Meanings

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2007

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2007

Thanks for your insighful comments and kind rating.
Glad you liked it.
Pupa

Comment from HealingMuse

Excellent

Hi Pupa,

WOW - what a great write!

And an excellent image you've selected here to help convey your message - it's quite effective!

Nicely done.

Nothing to suggest editing here.

And a poignant topic you raise - wouldn't it be nice if all the walls could (figuratively) come down...

Thanks for sharing.

WRITE ON,

Jan

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2007

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2007

Thanks Jan for a very encouraging and kind review and rating. I am glad you stopped by.
Pupa

Comment from Just2Write

Excellent

This poem is very well presented and shares with us the loneliness that the elderly experience on the other side of those walls. I liked the flow of the poem. 2Flower

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2007

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2007

Thank you so much for your kind review and rating.
Glad you liked it.
Pupa

Comment from Speedy T

Excellent

you do tell a really goods story here and i thought it was just a good tale all the way through, entertaining, nothing to change, all is in good form in my opinion.

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2007

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2007

Thanks for such an encouraging review and rating.
Glad you liked it.
Pupa

Comment from sngldad4gd

Excellent

It is kind of an evil looking wall isn't it? With it's two windowed eyes and straight lined mouth. This is a wonderful perspective you have given to wall my friend, I will view them a little differently as well from now on. Great piece of work. Ray :>)

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2007

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2007

Hi Ray,
Glad my words have affected you. This is very encouraging and appreciated.
Thanks for stopping by.
Pupa

reply by sngldad4gd on 16-Nov-2007

You're more than welcome my friend. Ray :>)

Comment from Martie

Excellent

Dear PUPA

I love it that you are writing to a wall. A wall is only alive because of the people inside of them...I like how you show this through your view and the great imagery you give through the windows. I happy to see one of your poems here for me to review, as you have reviewed so many of mine. :)

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2007

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2007

Hi Martie,

reply by the author on 16-Nov-2007

Hi Martie,
Thanks for a lovely review and kind rating. I am so glad you like my writing and appreciate it very much.
Take care my friend.
Pupa