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Poems and Essays

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Comment from IndianaIrish
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What a lovely and beautiful poem this is, Teri. One of your very finest for sure. And more than anything...I'm glad writing it made you happy!

Smiles,
Indy :>)

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2007


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2007
    Thank you Karyn. God bless. Love, Teri
Comment from Pit Bull Mom
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Deep breath! WOW, how inspiring, Teri. Your absolute faith not only shines through but makes the reader wish they had your faith themselves. You've done well on this, and I really like the picture you used, it's perfectly and calm and brings harmony to your words.

Heather

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2007


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2007
    Thank you Heather. I do my best writing when I am in physical pain or heart pain. Love you my friend. God bless. Teri
Comment from tteach
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Thre is a comforting feel to this poem. Just reading it gives me solace. I feel so much better now!

I can see this in a Christian publication.

One of the best things is the repeated phrase, "I look to the cross." Each time you tell us a different reason for seeking Jesus.
well done
terry

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2007


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2007
    Thank you my friend. Believe it or not, I write for a Christian publication. I think I had one of my works published this time. Hugs, Teri
Comment from PUPA
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Hi Teri,
This is such an uplifting poem, very assuring, comforting and encouraging.
I loved the line where you said:
I also look to the cross because that's where I belong
Yes He is our best friend, noone else is Always there for us
Thanks for an uplifting read.
Pupa

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2007


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2007
    Thank you my friend. God bless. Teri
Comment from mslink1
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During the good times and the bad
During times of happiness and sad
Look to the cross as you will see
Jesus will make a way for you and me
So true, so true, Teri. This is a little long than many you have written lately, but just as beautiful. I love the way you personalized it by using I. He truly is our friend, Isn't He. Love the wording. Mary

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2007


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2007
    Thank you Mary. Love you, Teri
Comment from Penpal
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HI Teri,

This is a splendid piece and reads like a hymn. Very wise words encompass its body and meaning. Nice message, and well written.

Sallysaucer

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2007


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2007
    Thank you my friend. God bless. Hugs, Teri
Comment from Bryana
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Dear Teri, you've written a beautiful, spiritual poem.
If we look to the cross and ask for His help I know
He always helps. He's our best friend.

I love this...

During the good times and the bad
During times of happiness and sad
Look to the cross as you will see
Jesus will make a way for you and me

Have a nice week-end

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2007


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2007
    Thank you my friend. God bless. Teri
Comment from ransomme
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Teri, this is beautiful and oh so true. I learned years ago to look to Jesus in good times and bad it makes life so much easier. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with us. God bless.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2007


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2007
    Thank you my friend. God bless. Teri
Comment from NadineM
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I really enjoyed your inspirational poem Teri! Awesome and comforting message.

Your rhyming pattern was good and the accompanying picture is a perfect match!

Thanks for sharing this very special heart-felt poem!

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2007


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2007
    Thank you my friend. God bless. Teri
Comment from garnbev
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A excellent and interesting read. A very strong poem. I really like the structure and dialogue of the work. The flow and structure guided me along with ease. I've nothing to critique. Nothing to change.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2007


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2007
    Thank you my friend. God bless. Teri