Comment from Jer4Clarity

Excellent

Once again another great poem from you my friend. I love the way you place your words down the page and help the reader to read these out loud.

~(;) Jer4Clarity
Creator of the Clarity Pyramid

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2007

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2007

hehe thanx lots! :-)

Comment from sngldad4gd

Excellent

Uhm, I could come up with a comical poem to these words but I won't hahahahahaha, with words like "Tinkling" and "flood" and , hahahahahaha. You did a wonderful job my friend. Geez quit laughing, you're gonna fall out of your chair, hahahaha. Ray :>)

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2007

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2007

couch lol - and i dare you to write that 'comical poem' hehehehe ;-)

reply by sngldad4gd on 15-Oct-2007

Hahahahahahaha, naw some might get offended by "cute tinkling sounds compared to mens floods" Hahahahahahahaha. OMG! I need seat belts for my chair, hahahaha

Comment from mmichelle97219

Excellent

I haven't sent you one lately. I will have to correct that. Now let me see if I can meet this one. I thought your answer was clever and colorful. Good post.
Michelle

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2007

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2007

lol
thanx lots :-)

Comment from duckylamour

Excellent

This is reflects the emotions that so many feel remembering. Emotions are in color and you described this very well. Reading this brings out emotions and usually we don't think of them in color but they are. This is excellent.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2007

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2007

thanx!! :-)

Comment from Gert sherwood

Exceptional

Hi shellei, Oh you have shown us a lady who memories that once were full of wonderful and colorful things in life, --are now fading away..
Loved it shellei.
gert

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2007

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2007

thanx much! :-)

reply by Gert sherwood on 15-Oct-2007

Hi shellei, I hope you saw the well deserved ((six. stars) You really impressed me with your thoughts.
Gert

Comment from steevie

Excellent

Excellent Very thought provoking verses and the transition from one line to the next is flawless! Congrats on this wonderful piece. Steevie

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2007

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2007

cool! thanx! :-)

Comment from KiaKai Isles

Excellent

Hey Shellei Kae.
Honey I am not sure I haven't already reviewed this. It just seems familiar, Oh well
I think emotions all play out like swearling colours, Good and bad, This came across very well in your poem
I liked the pace of this and I thought it flowed together well
Travis x

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2007

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2007

thanx lots :-)

Comment from experimentalpoet

Excellent

thank you so much - this is really a very vivid piece of poetry - rich with imagery and your words bring life to the picture you use to illustrate the piece.....I very much enjoyed reading it - it is well written and perfect....take care ep

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2007

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2007

thanx so much :-)

Comment from ransomme

Excellent

Really nice shelli kaye, I thank you for the notes explaining how to write this one.
I will consider the challenge. The picture and color scheme perfect for this piece of poetry. God bless.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2007

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2007

thanx lots for swirling by ;-)

reply by ransomme on 15-Oct-2007

LOL!

Comment from Annmuma

Excellent

I loved it!! It was as light and 'swirly' as the accompanying artwork. They work well together and I enjoyed 'reading' both the art and the poem.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2007

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2007

thanx lots!! :-)