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Comment from delia1111
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Thank you
for the honor
for a photo
of mine
to accompany
your thoughts
and well
written words.
Nice work
my friend.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2012


reply by the author on 09-Nov-2012
    You are always welcome . Blessings!
Comment from August Bug
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"Young
[noctural]
beauty
blooming
like shining stars
immensely
in the darkness:"

I loved the way you placed these words but there's a misspelling.
Here's the correction:

"Young
nocturnal
beauty
blooming
like shining stars
immensely
in the darkness:"

Great poem, thanks for sharing.

August Bug=:o)

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2007


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2007
    Thank you dear new friend of mine ! May God bless you! Thank you for your kindness , help and rating!
Comment from mamre07
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This one is awesome as you show the intoxicating effect that she has on you. You show how she changes the environment and even the seasons as she makes an impression on her environment.

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2007


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2007
    Thank you dear for your kindness and interest in my poor words!
Comment from AK
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Hello dear friend Alchera,

Lovely verse...I have enjoyed some of the lush little Italian numbers recently, so it is very nice to read you in English too!

blooming
like shining stars
immensely
in the darkness:
penetrating arrows

Good to see you again.
Ciao, caro amico!

Ami:)

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2007


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2007
    Thank you dearest friend of mine ! May God bless you!