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Dark Shadows

Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Absolutely Nothing"
A collection of short stories and flash fiction

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Comment from venusanblue
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A good story of frustration. Why is that every time you want to get to work, the phone rings, or visitors call, or the pets play up, or someone in the house wants you to find something. Aagh. Best thing when you have an idea,just write it down straight away, come back to it later; sometimes it works. I enjoyed this piece, I have days no weeks like this. When I realy want to dream I cant, so what goes through my brain when I'm sleeping...fresh air. Aagh. LOvely work. V,xxx

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2007


reply by the author on 23-Jul-2007
    LOL... I know! Makes you want to scream at the whole world :-)

    I thank you, my friend, for taking the time to read and review my work!
Comment from pizzaman
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Well done, this is certainly original! I believe that in all forms of creativity, artists find a stumbling block. The artist faces the white canvas syndrome, the writer, the writes block, yet you have taken such a situation and managed to write about it and on top of it all, put a smile on my dial... I'm sure that this is the beginning of the creative juices to flow and soon we will read a poem or a flash fiction from you...
Regards,
pizzaman

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2007


reply by the author on 23-Jul-2007
    I was hoping for original. I don't believe, in all my years of being a member, that I have seen anything like it... but of course, I could have just missed it ;-)

    I'm glad I was able to give you a chuckle and convey the aggravation of writer's block. and you're right... after that, I find that I have tons of ides to choose from. Now, I simply have to get them on the page...LOL

    Thank you for taking the time to erad my story and review :-)
Comment from kintesiegel
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Boy does this ring true and in a way it is funny that is, funny, except I know when I feel that way I get very pouty and depressed and usually end up pretending I don't exist in front of the tv. talk about gfiving up.

Your voice and story are adorable and fun. keep it up. you are an inspiration

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2007


reply by the author on 23-Jul-2007
    I have been guilty of the same thing! Eventually I kick myself in the deriare and make myself write something. Even if it's gibberish. Perhaps something halfway decent will appear in all the muck! Thank you for taking the time to read and review!