No Name Child
A Cutter's Letter to God49 total reviews
Comment from Josipher32
You followed the rules of the contest very well. Story makes sense. Believable dialogue. No errors. Good job and good luck.
reply by the author on 30-May-2007
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You followed the rules of the contest very well. Story makes sense. Believable dialogue. No errors. Good job and good luck.
Comment Written 30-May-2007
reply by the author on 30-May-2007
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Thank you for stopping by....not a very positive subject, but one that needs to be told....take care...diane
Comment from Popcorn69
Interesting topic, I have heard about this before, but did not realize it was so widespread. Good job writing, no errors, thanks for sharing this information.
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Interesting topic, I have heard about this before, but did not realize it was so widespread. Good job writing, no errors, thanks for sharing this information.
Comment Written 24-May-2007
Comment from Karen Fay
I've heard of these disease before but I guess I never thought it was that wide spread and I admit I don't understand it at all God bless.......Karen fay
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I've heard of these disease before but I guess I never thought it was that wide spread and I admit I don't understand it at all God bless.......Karen fay
Comment Written 23-May-2007
Comment from candycane
No Name Child...
interesting format to write a story
but for me actually made it easier to follow and flow
good job with the piece, i saw no errors or mistakes to point out.
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No Name Child...
interesting format to write a story
but for me actually made it easier to follow and flow
good job with the piece, i saw no errors or mistakes to point out.
Comment Written 23-May-2007
Comment from vanillatte
Hello Mrs. KT,
This is sad. I had a hard time reading it. This contest certainly is a challenge! You've rose to the occassion and wrote a riveting and gripping narrative that needs to be told. I wasn't aware of this practice.
Best of luck!
Lorna
reply by the author on 23-May-2007
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Hello Mrs. KT,
This is sad. I had a hard time reading it. This contest certainly is a challenge! You've rose to the occassion and wrote a riveting and gripping narrative that needs to be told. I wasn't aware of this practice.
Best of luck!
Lorna
Comment Written 23-May-2007
reply by the author on 23-May-2007
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I wasn't aware of it either until I met these young women...hopefully, they will receive the care they need...diane
Comment from HVSparks
Well, KT,
Lotsa words
Well put
Nice flow
Story told
Feel pain
Nice going
HV Sparks
PS: Spent a great four days on the Dorr Penninsula a few years ago.
reply by the author on 22-May-2007
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Well, KT,
Lotsa words
Well put
Nice flow
Story told
Feel pain
Nice going
HV Sparks
PS: Spent a great four days on the Dorr Penninsula a few years ago.
Comment Written 22-May-2007
reply by the author on 22-May-2007
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So glad! What fun! Come again! Best wishes....diane
Comment from Pat Mohr
Dear Mrs. KT
Magnificent job. I had goose bumps while reading this. I am a Christian counsellor to hurting women. You were able to describe the horror these girls experience.
The two-word sentences were well thought out. Congratulations.
Blessings, Pat
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Dear Mrs. KT
Magnificent job. I had goose bumps while reading this. I am a Christian counsellor to hurting women. You were able to describe the horror these girls experience.
The two-word sentences were well thought out. Congratulations.
Blessings, Pat
Comment Written 22-May-2007
Comment from Showboat
Hi Mrs. KT,
It's incredible, the lengths kids go to when they hate themselves. Self-mutilation, annorexia, drug and alcohol indulgence, it's just tragic.
Thank you for bringing this pitiful situation to our attention. I don't know how to fix it, but knowledge is power, and you're spreading the word.
Gayle
reply by the author on 22-May-2007
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Hi Mrs. KT,
It's incredible, the lengths kids go to when they hate themselves. Self-mutilation, annorexia, drug and alcohol indulgence, it's just tragic.
Thank you for bringing this pitiful situation to our attention. I don't know how to fix it, but knowledge is power, and you're spreading the word.
Gayle
Comment Written 22-May-2007
reply by the author on 22-May-2007
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I hope so Gayle...I am afraid this business is far more prevalent than what people realize....Take Care....diane
Comment from Speedy T
interesting format to write a story but for me actually made it easier to follow and flow
good job with the piece, i saw no errors or mistakes to point out.
reply by the author on 22-May-2007
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interesting format to write a story but for me actually made it easier to follow and flow
good job with the piece, i saw no errors or mistakes to point out.
Comment Written 22-May-2007
reply by the author on 22-May-2007
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Never tried this before, so it was new to me too!!! Take Care = Glad you enjoyed! diane
Comment from jcwriter
Well, tell them, don't "damn" anything, especially in the name of God, since he will answer that prayer. Forgiveness is given, the moment it is asked for. Perhaps have them write poetry (oh, that is probably what you are doing). Ask them to experience the world, out in their middle class worlds, in their home gardens, looking at sunsets, touching trees. On my website, there is an article, Building the Brain through the senses, you may want to read. It can help with these girls, since it deals with the issue of sensory issues. They may need sensory integration help. Go to sensory international's webpage; there is help there. Please try. Have them stand and write. Have them do a figure eight a few times to engage both hemispheres and strengthen the corpus callosum. Many of them may be learning disabled; look at their facial features. Low hairline; ear level below eye level; midface hypoplasia? The face speaks volumes.
reply by the author on 22-May-2007
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Well, tell them, don't "damn" anything, especially in the name of God, since he will answer that prayer. Forgiveness is given, the moment it is asked for. Perhaps have them write poetry (oh, that is probably what you are doing). Ask them to experience the world, out in their middle class worlds, in their home gardens, looking at sunsets, touching trees. On my website, there is an article, Building the Brain through the senses, you may want to read. It can help with these girls, since it deals with the issue of sensory issues. They may need sensory integration help. Go to sensory international's webpage; there is help there. Please try. Have them stand and write. Have them do a figure eight a few times to engage both hemispheres and strengthen the corpus callosum. Many of them may be learning disabled; look at their facial features. Low hairline; ear level below eye level; midface hypoplasia? The face speaks volumes.
Comment Written 22-May-2007
reply by the author on 22-May-2007
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Thank you so much for such an informative review! Take Care...diane
