Comment from rl dubour

Excellent

witch's brew I smiled all the way through this one you have done a great job with the imatery you have to read one I wrote similar to this
085th post, dated 12-12-05, title-The wicked witch, and two evil cats

let me know what you think? ron

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2006

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2006

cats are not evil!

oh what does "imatery" mean???? hehe ;-)

Comment from Beatlegirl61

Excellent

Hah! Really nice 'brew'...So are you feeling 'witchy'?? Just kidding! I felt this was so very creative & quite unique and was an enjoyable read...That Rayjay's a great guy, huh?
Peace and good will...Carol ::D

'beatle' quote today: "My independence seems to vanish in the haze..."

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2006

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2006

hehehehe
you should know by now that i am a little angel ;-)

Comment from mmichelle97219

Excellent

This is a really creative third person view of a witch in action. It is not troubling, horrific, or disturbing just a view of fascination. This is brilliantly written.

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2006

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2006

cool!
thank you so much! :-)

Comment from KING SLATON

Excellent

The holiday mood is a bit off but I did enjoy what I could read of this piece.
you definitely should consider changing font color as this combination is quite difficult to read.

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2006

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2006

will check it out
thanx lots :-)

Comment from Norbanus

Excellent

Oh my gosh! We can't have this
Our Shelley's rating hit or miss
Dropping back to rank as six
Leaves her in a sorry fix

We've got to find a cure for that
Can't have the panda going flat

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2006

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2006

hehehe
thank you soooooooo much!!

(cause i really really want that trophy!! never got one before lol :-P)

Comment from boutique

Good

Hmmm. For the 6 ranked poet I'm disappointed. I read you comments and notes and see where you were going, however, you repeated words that were flat to begin with. You had a great opportunity to crank out some awesome words, yet you went, the trite route. Nothing sizzled, or was vaporous, just stirring and boiling and ...a hot fire's flame. Sorry but that really left me cold. I also think it ought to be in first person to give it power. This just seemed cartoonish, something for children. If that was your goal than OK but I think you really could have fun with it and raise some goosebumps on your reads necks. That's just my opinion, for what it's worth.

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2006

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2006

yea, another reviewer said something about first person too
am workin on that
thank you much :-)

Comment from margyl

Excellent

And so you did, shelley. This is really cute and well done. I expected you to come up with some venom or something but you were just stirring.

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2006

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2006

lol
thanx lots! :-)

Comment from 24chas

Good

I don't know, Shelley. Usually your poems have something to say, but this one didn't quite come off that way to me. Maybe it would have been better written in first person.

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2006

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2006

hmm first person huh?
interesting will write that out
and see how it sounds
thanx lots! :-)

Comment from RaymondJohn

Excellent

Yup, you sure did. Thanks for the nice attribution. It was great fun to read. The color scheme is pretty cute, too. Another great read, my dear. Ray.

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2006

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2006

hehehe
thanx lots! :-)

Comment from fedoozle

Excellent

I'm thankful taht you added that anecdote by RaymondJohn-It amde all the difference, and added a new dimension to this entry. Before, it was just fun. Now, it's fun-tastic!

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2006

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2006

LOL!
thank you lots! :-)