Challenge Me
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31 total reviews
Comment from wordsareus
I like the idea for your book and I like your poem. I especially like the line 'help my mind think, help my muse drink'.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2013
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I like the idea for your book and I like your poem. I especially like the line 'help my mind think, help my muse drink'.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2013
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thank you words :)
Comment from goldenpoetry
Awesome poem Shelley! I need to read this to myself everyday... I haven't been challenging myself enough. This is a great inspiration to me and others. Thank you. I also love the artwork.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2013
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Awesome poem Shelley! I need to read this to myself everyday... I haven't been challenging myself enough. This is a great inspiration to me and others. Thank you. I also love the artwork.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2013
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thank you golde :)
Comment from Deborah Marie
Excellent wording and meaning. Nice progression, flow and rhythm. Extremely nice photo too! Can't wait to read the rest of your book. Thanks for sharing, Deb
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2013
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Excellent wording and meaning. Nice progression, flow and rhythm. Extremely nice photo too! Can't wait to read the rest of your book. Thanks for sharing, Deb
Comment Written 24-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2013
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thank you deb :)
Comment from whizpurr ^-^
Hi Shell,
What an excellent read. I see the poem has done very well and I wish I had six stars left to send your way. Your heartfelt message was so easy to relate to. Great work!
Hugs, Purr
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
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Hi Shell,
What an excellent read. I see the poem has done very well and I wish I had six stars left to send your way. Your heartfelt message was so easy to relate to. Great work!
Hugs, Purr
Comment Written 21-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
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thank you purr :-)
Comment from EMB
This is something every writer should be saying to herself when it's time to put pen to paper. And we can do this endlessly. Every time we finish a piece of work, try to improve it another five or ten times. (Is that challenging enough? Ha!)
Great poem. :)
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2013
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This is something every writer should be saying to herself when it's time to put pen to paper. And we can do this endlessly. Every time we finish a piece of work, try to improve it another five or ten times. (Is that challenging enough? Ha!)
Great poem. :)
Comment Written 20-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2013
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lol thank you eddie :-)
Comment from ahamranji
A highly creative poem that shows the poet's dilemma; that yearning for some fresh inspiration. The poetic soul wants so much to write but the writer's block sets in at times. Awesome. Regards.
R Cassandra
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
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A highly creative poem that shows the poet's dilemma; that yearning for some fresh inspiration. The poetic soul wants so much to write but the writer's block sets in at times. Awesome. Regards.
R Cassandra
Comment Written 19-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
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thank you aham :)
Comment from nomi338
i challenge you to write a poem in 15 words or less about fearing not measuring up. Can you describe being before a room full of all the people you have ever admired and fearing that one or all of them might say to you that you are not good enough.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
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i challenge you to write a poem in 15 words or less about fearing not measuring up. Can you describe being before a room full of all the people you have ever admired and fearing that one or all of them might say to you that you are not good enough.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
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ooh good one! will definitely start working on it (probably post next week - wanna wait until this cert runs its course :)
thanx nomi! :)
Comment from Pili Pubul
An excellent poem, you my dear know how to challenge yourself and did it.
Love the message anyway, and had seen you participate in many challenging contests. I am so glad you revived this poem... Pili
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
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An excellent poem, you my dear know how to challenge yourself and did it.
Love the message anyway, and had seen you participate in many challenging contests. I am so glad you revived this poem... Pili
Comment Written 18-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
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thank you pili :)
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You are very welcome. Pili
Comment from Sasha
I'm going to skip over the 'youv'e dazzled me part and get right to it. How about trying something with:
Summer
Breeze
waterfall
wind
winding dirt road
These words just popped into my mind. I challenge you to write a poem with them.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
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I'm going to skip over the 'youv'e dazzled me part and get right to it. How about trying something with:
Summer
Breeze
waterfall
wind
winding dirt road
These words just popped into my mind. I challenge you to write a poem with them.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2013
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cool! thank you smurphette! :-)
Comment from michaelcahill
I suspect this is intended to draw me into something. if that is the case then it is successful. I do want to see where it leads. this is well-written with perfectly chosen wording. when something is simple it is so easy to ruin with one poorly chosen word or phrase. well done.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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I suspect this is intended to draw me into something. if that is the case then it is successful. I do want to see where it leads. this is well-written with perfectly chosen wording. when something is simple it is so easy to ruin with one poorly chosen word or phrase. well done.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2013
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thank you michael :)
