Comment from Slythytove2

Good

This almost never happens but I have not a clue what your poem is about. Read it as many times as may be, I can not put any meaning to the combination of word. I'm sure there must be some central core, but I can't find it. Sorry.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks

reply by Slythytove2 on 18-Apr-2013

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Comment from Blackbird158

Good

A very interesting idea.

I like your contrasts with white and black and your intro sentence. What kind of a poem is this supposed to be?

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks

Comment from Beatlegirl61

Excellent

Really excellent comparisons here within such a restricted form! You've done real well with this and I really enjoyed reading your senyru...I like shorter forms the best...so this was a treat for me! Nice subject as well...
Libve life and be well...Carol ::)

'beatle' quote today: "If you don't know where you're goin'...any road will take you there..." (George Harrison)

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2006

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for nice professional review
sorry for the late

Comment from VICTIMEYES

Excellent

well this is just a delight if i am getting, my interpretation is a good one and if i could explain it or put it in like style i would, but great image of the origin of the career of his music.well written.

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2006

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for nice review
sorry for the late

Comment from marion

Excellent

Is this a haiku Acreator Writer? Well it doesn't matter (says a lover of haiku) because it is the same 5/7/5 and I adore it. I think they are one of the most prayerful clever pieces of writing in so few words/syllables. I have to write it out so I can capture even more the deep beauty in this one.

Happy with short-lived
Dark, illusive, black pleasure
If tasted white joy!

I loved it. Marion

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2006

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for fantastic review
sorry for the late

Comment from joyshri

Excellent

Brief, well crafted with a wealth of feeling expressed through very few words.I admire this quality of brevity and the economical word usage. Joyshri.

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 Comment Written 24-Aug-2006

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for nice review
sorry for the late