Comment from rivki1111

Excellent

Wow...this was very original and you did a great job with publishing choices...kewl graphic etc...

The imagery was very different and the poem quite a challenge to understand...that doesn't matter though, as i don't rate poetry with understanding...it has to sound like poetry though, and this does.....excellent flow throughout also...

Thanks for sharing your writing with me, this was a very unique work I would recommend to other readers for review, cheers, rivki

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2006

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for nice professional review
sorry for the late

Comment from Adora Bayles

Excellent

Wow! You took God out of us and turned around and put him right back in! I cannot correct your English because I got lost in Cybergods. I must give you one rule though, that many people confuse. There are no apostrophes in the possessive first, second and third person.
Mine, ours, yours, theirs, his hers its.
And you want to know something? When all the computers fail, we will still have our certification as humans!
Adora

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 Comment Written 24-Aug-2006

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for nice review
sorry for the late