Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I;'m sorry I have no six star to give you
Please accept these from me******
You capyure my attention from the first line to the last
I found your writeto befilled with wisdom and a delight to read.
thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for honest appreciable review

Comment from Schalk Jacobs

Excellent

A very complex poem that asks some very interesting questions. As for the style in which you wrote this poem, you get a tick as you fullfilled the requirements of an acrostic poem. Did it flow? Yes. Your topic needed heavy words to illustrate the point you are trying to make. Was there a message? Definately.

Finally my little personal quirk when reviewing, will I remeber this poem? Yes, because it makes you think of society and your reaction to it and yourself.

Well done.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for nice professional review

Comment from CR Delport

Excellent

Your poems really have some deep meaning and I had to read it a few times to get the jest of it, and still am not sure that I did :) Yes, man got lost in his own importance and very rarely does something to help his fellow humans if it doesnt benifit himself.

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for nice professional review

Comment from Norbanus

Excellent

As often is the case with tales in verse
this one reveals a story rich in love.
The mankind is blind but still he can traverse
the curtain with a soft and gentle shove

I breathe in deep, the essence of this verse
no breathlessness to lessen understanding's glow
No choice to shock by raw crudeness or worse
just lay out humanness for those who know

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for nice poetic professional review

Comment from hollydee

Exceptional

This is by far one of the best and longest acrostics I have ever read. The words were pure, sincere and touching. I think you did an excellent job with this piece. Congratulations on a beautiful piece of work.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2006

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for nice review with highest rating
sorry for the late

Comment from JennaJo

Good

To be honest, I understood this one a lot better than some of your other poems. That's not a slight to you, just a reflection upon me. This poem was very honest and thought-provoking. Admirable. A couple of lines stuck out to me:

Over discrimination, does air {blows} indiscriminately?
Air would blow, not blows, I believe.

You can be human; don't oceans help you {civilized}?
I admit to bafflement on this one: does civilized describe "you"? Not sure, but it was still a confusing part for me.

Overall, an excellent portrayal of your thoughts. I enjoyed it.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2006

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks
sorry for the late

Comment from 1archangel

Excellent

Great Acrostic!! It takes a special "artist" to do well with this type of writing, in opinion it's a pain - Excellent message and very interest reading
Favorite verse is the last
didn't find errors or typos
Professional, as always - I really enjoyed the read

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2006

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for nice review
sorry for the late