Comment from Beatlegirl61

Excellent

I really enjoyed this piece and especially liked the form you have chosen and that you have made some great points through the grand choice of wordage! I also like the metaphors too...Nicely written!! Take care and be well...Carol ::)

'beatle' quote today: "Turn off your mind, relax and float downstream..."

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2006

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for nice review
sorry for the late

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

This is a beautiful poem that is very well written with feeling running through your lines I enjoyed you have chosen beautiful picture to enhance this work regards Fuller

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2006

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2006

THANKS A LOT FOR SUCH A GLOWING, DAZZLING, LIGHTENING REVIEW WITH HIGH ORDER OF APPRECIATION I DO APPRECIATE MUCH.

Comment from Saharhb

Exceptional

Wow... i must say the words come in a flow that creates the very picture in your mind. the peom is captivating yet simple, beautiful yet distant, abstract yet clear. its a masterpiecs in its own way. A treat for nature and poetry lovers!

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2006

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2006

THANKS A LOT FOR SUCH A MAGNIFICENT, COLORFUL, LIVELY, SUNNY AND POETIC REVIEW THAT I APPRECIATE SO MUCH.

YOUR WORDS CAME WITH A GLOWING, NATURAL FLOW ALONGWITH HIGH ORDER OF CONTRASTS ---- ARE SOURCE OF INCESSANT PLEASURE TO THE CAUSE OF LITERARY MODE OF APPRECIATION.

YOUR ORDER OF EXPRESSIVENESS IS A MATTER OF HIGH ORDER OF RECOGNITION TO WRITING POETRY.

YOUR WISDOM IN LITERARY APPRECIATION IS EVIDENT AND PRAISEWORTHY.

IT WAS INDEED A GOOD TREAT TO A POET, NATURE AND GOD.

IT WAS A REMARKABLE THOUGHT ORDERLY EXPRESSED.

WISHING YOU EVERY SUCCESS.

Comment from marion

Excellent

Really unusual little poem that I absolutely loved....
Hearts dance, flash red rose - Love this line.....
Not to forget - I hay, dusk takes notes, flows life
Simple, clever, great colours, awesome photoart.
Yes I liked it very much - marion.


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 Comment Written 20-Aug-2006

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2006

THANKS A LOT FOR SUCH A HEART-FELT, TRUE TO THE ART, COMPACT LITERARY REVIEW I DO APPRECIATE MUCH.