Comment from Black_Oxygen

Excellent

This poetry suggests, I think, that each new day should
be embraced and celebrated as a "clean slate". No photo
is needed; the words are ample. Thank You for sharing.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for good review

Comment from donaldww

Excellent

This is a sunny gold poem, full of bright hopes, dancing hearts, birds, etc.

At long last, Noon tells his gift: "The sun blooms in full and I'm going to go haying." His buddy, Dusk, takes notes, and thankfully the day flows briskly to the end.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for nice review

Comment from wanderlost

Excellent

Your poetic style is very interesting to me. the broken nature of your poems without the use of cesura is very interesting. I do not know what you are trying to convey through your word choices. but it is very interesting

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for good review

Comment from Righteous Riter

Excellent

The writer does a good job of delivering the message in an understandable way. The writer taps into the mind of the reader as the reader can feel the passion of the writer.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for nice review

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Life does go on and on. It's so comforting to know God is there to help and guide us throughout the day. This is a very well written poem. It flows smoothly.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for good review

Comment from jaeladarling

Excellent

"Dawn brings diamond lights"

Love this line - such imagery! :) Great wording and style in this piece, making an overall enjoyable read. Nice work!

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for nice review

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very wel lwritten, alcreator, you did a great job writing this poem about the way the sun shines down at different places during the day. i enjoyed reading it.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for good review

Comment from Galactia

Excellent

Another wonderfdul poem reflecting joys of life, happiness and love.

love the line...

Morn spreads bird wings, sky high aims.

beautifully written

GFreat job

Regards
Tia

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for excellent review

Comment from Perp Ihebom

Good

This is a nice piece of writing appreciating God's works in creation. The descriptions are good with nice images that give the reader an idea of what beauties must have inspired the poem. The last line is confusing. Needs another touch. well done

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks

Comment from October21

Excellent

Excellent imagery in the fantastic first stanza!:D Life is portrayed in a beautiful, enviable and wonderful way, a perfect world to live in. Loved your word choice, always leaves a reader thinking, and the bright colours to reflect the mood and tone:-)

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for professional review