O My God and Mother Nature!
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Sunray"Appreciation of God and Mother Nature
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Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Now this I understand fully -
wonderful imagery in your words,
all God's creations, gifts
given free
for us to enjoy
Most impressive, my friend.
Margaret
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Now this I understand fully -
wonderful imagery in your words,
all God's creations, gifts
given free
for us to enjoy
Most impressive, my friend.
Margaret
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
Comment from Mai Mai
This is an interesting piece. It seems to have a heavy spiritual content, covered in metaphors. Good job and good luck.
Mai Mai
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This is an interesting piece. It seems to have a heavy spiritual content, covered in metaphors. Good job and good luck.
Mai Mai
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
Comment from Curtis Hatch
God's order of dawn before the day is part of the nature of things. Light brings life and exposes the bounty of the natural order of the Creator. The imagery is excellent and helps my mind's eye to see.
Curtis
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God's order of dawn before the day is part of the nature of things. Light brings life and exposes the bounty of the natural order of the Creator. The imagery is excellent and helps my mind's eye to see.
Curtis
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
Comment from mauial
The cadence to this piece to me is jarring and after reading some of your other pieces I see that is part of your style. I like it.
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The cadence to this piece to me is jarring and after reading some of your other pieces I see that is part of your style. I like it.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
Comment from ravenblack
like " hearts dance, flash red rose", but again, you seem to lose control of the piece. 2nd stanza, third line - " work sense" should be " works sense" and just what do you mean by "I hay" in the last line?
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like " hearts dance, flash red rose", but again, you seem to lose control of the piece. 2nd stanza, third line - " work sense" should be " works sense" and just what do you mean by "I hay" in the last line?
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
Comment from Jerry Rauhuff
Dawn brings diamond lights, bright hopes.--I like this line. I like the sunrise even though most my stories and poems are dark, I live in the light. I say well done with this one as well.
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Dawn brings diamond lights, bright hopes.--I like this line. I like the sunrise even though most my stories and poems are dark, I live in the light. I say well done with this one as well.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
Comment from prayingpoet
Ok, so this one made a little sense, I could actually understand what you were trying to convey. This one line was quite smooth and nice, not so choppy.
"Life glows sunny gold.
Dawn brings diamond lights, bright hopes."
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Ok, so this one made a little sense, I could actually understand what you were trying to convey. This one line was quite smooth and nice, not so choppy.
"Life glows sunny gold.
Dawn brings diamond lights, bright hopes."
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
Comment from OLA THOMAS
Good attribute, wonderful tribute to nature, season and the maker of all of these. A well rendered work; I really like this stanza 'Morn spreads bird wings, sky high aims.
Morning shows day books.
His Grace, Ray floods mood, work sense.'
ola thomas
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Good attribute, wonderful tribute to nature, season and the maker of all of these. A well rendered work; I really like this stanza 'Morn spreads bird wings, sky high aims.
Morning shows day books.
His Grace, Ray floods mood, work sense.'
ola thomas
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
Comment from allborn66
This is a very nice piece. I love the mental images it inspires. The word choice is very vivid. It has a nice flow.
Barbara
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This is a very nice piece. I love the mental images it inspires. The word choice is very vivid. It has a nice flow.
Barbara
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
Comment from mizzkris20
The title itself grabbed my attention and the poem pulled me in. The peom is captivating, simple, and beautiful. Your choice of words are great and nice photo
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The title itself grabbed my attention and the poem pulled me in. The peom is captivating, simple, and beautiful. Your choice of words are great and nice photo
Comment Written 17-Mar-2013
