O My God and Mother Nature!
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Comment from OLA THOMAS
Faith in God surely goes with blessings, passing His tests is nothing more than to tenaciously observe His tenents. This too is very enduring. Good work.
ola thomas
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Faith in God surely goes with blessings, passing His tests is nothing more than to tenaciously observe His tenents. This too is very enduring. Good work.
ola thomas
Comment Written 22-Mar-2013
Comment from Sanku
yes we all breathe the same air.do your duty is what our indian teachers all say .have faith in god and work hard .his blessings will come automatically.
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yes we all breathe the same air.do your duty is what our indian teachers all say .have faith in god and work hard .his blessings will come automatically.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2013
Comment from c_lucas
Life offers man/woman their tests. God is there for moral support. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
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Life offers man/woman their tests. God is there for moral support. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2013
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well wirtten, alcreator, you did a great job writing this short poem, but we don't earn status by doing works. we do works because we love. i enjoyed reading it
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this is very well wirtten, alcreator, you did a great job writing this short poem, but we don't earn status by doing works. we do works because we love. i enjoyed reading it
Comment Written 22-Mar-2013
Comment from rjuselius
this is a fantastic piece of poetry concerning faith!
i like the structure of the poem and the message.
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
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this is a fantastic piece of poetry concerning faith!
i like the structure of the poem and the message.
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
Comment Written 22-Mar-2013
Comment from Perp Ihebom
This is a well written. The poem admonishes the reader on how to make the very best out of life- believing in God, serving humanity and living a life of confidence. kudos
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This is a well written. The poem admonishes the reader on how to make the very best out of life- believing in God, serving humanity and living a life of confidence. kudos
Comment Written 22-Mar-2013
Comment from closetpoetjester
Now this one is quite good, again, as the rating reflects however you sound like the businessman with this line:
"Earn status through work"
Do you not mean "earn heavenly status through God's work"??
If you do then I'd look at expressing it that way, otherwise I like the spirit with which this is intended.
Finally, one that makes a lot more sense. Thanks for sharing, this HONESTLY is much better than some of your previous writes. Nothing wrong with being a bit ambiguous here and there but when it makes not a lot of sense, its quite hard to expect your readers to follow.
Anyhow this however it was intended seems quite a solid expression...good luck with your future writes.
Cheers P
PS I am NEVER I repeat NEVER influenced by others reviews. I make a point of NOT reading them til I've given my own view.
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Now this one is quite good, again, as the rating reflects however you sound like the businessman with this line:
"Earn status through work"
Do you not mean "earn heavenly status through God's work"??
If you do then I'd look at expressing it that way, otherwise I like the spirit with which this is intended.
Finally, one that makes a lot more sense. Thanks for sharing, this HONESTLY is much better than some of your previous writes. Nothing wrong with being a bit ambiguous here and there but when it makes not a lot of sense, its quite hard to expect your readers to follow.
Anyhow this however it was intended seems quite a solid expression...good luck with your future writes.
Cheers P
PS I am NEVER I repeat NEVER influenced by others reviews. I make a point of NOT reading them til I've given my own view.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2013
Comment from prayingpoet
Have God Faith...that is a good line..."God like" faith is strong faith. "Feel pride; He too breathes same air." Not sure I agree with you on this on buddy, appears to put God on the same level as man and that simply is not true.
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Have God Faith...that is a good line..."God like" faith is strong faith. "Feel pride; He too breathes same air." Not sure I agree with you on this on buddy, appears to put God on the same level as man and that simply is not true.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2013
Comment from vkmack
What a beautiful thought that God breaths the same air as all of us. I do love the image that brings to mind. This reads like an instruction book to salvation and happiness. Your work here is very strong.
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What a beautiful thought that God breaths the same air as all of us. I do love the image that brings to mind. This reads like an instruction book to salvation and happiness. Your work here is very strong.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2013
Comment from yonashalom
This poem is interesting as I can see some relation to Scriptures. I particularly like the line
Live in free infinite gifts
That causes one to stop and think.
The last line throws me a little with "feel pride" as pride is listed as the number one root of sin.
"He too breathes same air" is another line to ponder. I wonder where you are going with that thought, though?
Good form for poem. ~Yona
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This poem is interesting as I can see some relation to Scriptures. I particularly like the line
Live in free infinite gifts
That causes one to stop and think.
The last line throws me a little with "feel pride" as pride is listed as the number one root of sin.
"He too breathes same air" is another line to ponder. I wonder where you are going with that thought, though?
Good form for poem. ~Yona
Comment Written 21-Mar-2013
