O My God and Mother Nature!
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Comment from Charlene0513
To Alcreator Litt Dear,
We have been blest not only that our sins be forgiven but also that we may live in total, wholeness of mind, body and soul.To believe in His Name is the key and not to boast but remain humble in His eyes.
Charlene
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To Alcreator Litt Dear,
We have been blest not only that our sins be forgiven but also that we may live in total, wholeness of mind, body and soul.To believe in His Name is the key and not to boast but remain humble in His eyes.
Charlene
Comment Written 22-Mar-2013
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Have God faith; be blest.
Pass His tests, serve man selfless.
Earn status per work,
Live in free infinite gifts
Feel pride; He too breathes same air
Apart from "Have God faith" which seems a strange way of putting it -- I like this spiritual poem -- which is much more clear than the previous poems of yours I've read.
Margaret
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Have God faith; be blest.
Pass His tests, serve man selfless.
Earn status per work,
Live in free infinite gifts
Feel pride; He too breathes same air
Apart from "Have God faith" which seems a strange way of putting it -- I like this spiritual poem -- which is much more clear than the previous poems of yours I've read.
Margaret
Comment Written 22-Mar-2013
Comment from Galactia
Great little poem reflecting your God and beliefs that God is walking amungst us, breathing our same air, Past his test and recieve his gifts of love and iternalty into the after life. perfect Tanka form with correct syllable line of: 5'7'5'7'7
Great job
Regards
Tia
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Great little poem reflecting your God and beliefs that God is walking amungst us, breathing our same air, Past his test and recieve his gifts of love and iternalty into the after life. perfect Tanka form with correct syllable line of: 5'7'5'7'7
Great job
Regards
Tia
Comment Written 22-Mar-2013
Comment from juliedickson55
Haven't heard that usage of blest much [over blessed]
It feel's as though it wants to be God's faith, but I'm sure it's not how you meant it?
Earning status with hard work is good- we deserve things once earned more than what's just given.
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Haven't heard that usage of blest much [over blessed]
It feel's as though it wants to be God's faith, but I'm sure it's not how you meant it?
Earning status with hard work is good- we deserve things once earned more than what's just given.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2013
Comment from kiwigirl2821
I wonder at the interpretation of your idea of what faith and God is all about. It feels more negative than blessed. I hope this is not the true state of your convictions. Take care and good luck. xoxo Kiwi
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I wonder at the interpretation of your idea of what faith and God is all about. It feels more negative than blessed. I hope this is not the true state of your convictions. Take care and good luck. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 22-Mar-2013
Comment from CR Delport
A lovely poem that's well written and well delivered. It flows nicely and reads easy. Lovely art work to go with the poem. We all need faith, doesnt matter what we believe in.
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A lovely poem that's well written and well delivered. It flows nicely and reads easy. Lovely art work to go with the poem. We all need faith, doesnt matter what we believe in.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2013
Comment from dmt1967
This is another good poem I like the way it says 'earn status at work' and have faith in god very apt I think and I like the style thank you for sharing
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This is another good poem I like the way it says 'earn status at work' and have faith in god very apt I think and I like the style thank you for sharing
Comment Written 22-Mar-2013
Comment from GarthL
Well said, work for the common good, do your best, maintain good relationships and have Faith that the provider of the all and everything wants the best for us at all times. Well written!! StayStrong, Garth
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Well said, work for the common good, do your best, maintain good relationships and have Faith that the provider of the all and everything wants the best for us at all times. Well written!! StayStrong, Garth
Comment Written 22-Mar-2013
Comment from kashmayank
well it was short and effective conveyed the right message in the right way the words were well choosen and crafted all the best
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well it was short and effective conveyed the right message in the right way the words were well choosen and crafted all the best
Comment Written 22-Mar-2013
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I am beginning to understand you. It was hard at first, but having now read a few of your poems, I can read the messages in them. This is a really good poem. Have faith, that is all you need to do, one you have that, the rest follows easily. Good write! xsx Sandra
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I am beginning to understand you. It was hard at first, but having now read a few of your poems, I can read the messages in them. This is a really good poem. Have faith, that is all you need to do, one you have that, the rest follows easily. Good write! xsx Sandra
Comment Written 22-Mar-2013
