O My God and Mother Nature!
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Comment from Janet Foor
Have God faith; be blest.
Pass His tests, serve man selfless.
Earn status per work,
Live in free infinite gifts
Feel pride; He too breathes same air.
The first and last lines were my favorite.
I enjoyed this one
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Have God faith; be blest.
Pass His tests, serve man selfless.
Earn status per work,
Live in free infinite gifts
Feel pride; He too breathes same air.
The first and last lines were my favorite.
I enjoyed this one
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
Comment from cvcopac
He left his mother, father, his home, to follow the circus. He left without a word, with empty pockets and a heart full of hope. He returned with an empty heart and pockets full of dope.
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He left his mother, father, his home, to follow the circus. He left without a word, with empty pockets and a heart full of hope. He returned with an empty heart and pockets full of dope.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
Comment from MizKat
Alcreator Litt Dear - All of your poems are worthy of six stars. I really like this one so in my mind it deserves a six star rating. Kat
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Alcreator Litt Dear - All of your poems are worthy of six stars. I really like this one so in my mind it deserves a six star rating. Kat
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
Comment from dannyleonn
Another wonderful piece.
It conjures up feelings of working for the "every man" and the religious view of "Do work."
As always, I enjoy "your" style and after reading, I feel refreshed in my daily lesson of humanity and humility.
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Another wonderful piece.
It conjures up feelings of working for the "every man" and the religious view of "Do work."
As always, I enjoy "your" style and after reading, I feel refreshed in my daily lesson of humanity and humility.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
Comment from Caressa_08
You have a lot of poems out there....This one displays a simple message that is evident, if man, will be true to God's teachings, he will be blest...Good message, though, he must be human first to really understand & live as God wants him to live, serving his fellow man & be forever rewarded..I put maybe more to this, than the way you interpret this your own poem creation.
Blessings, your way....
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You have a lot of poems out there....This one displays a simple message that is evident, if man, will be true to God's teachings, he will be blest...Good message, though, he must be human first to really understand & live as God wants him to live, serving his fellow man & be forever rewarded..I put maybe more to this, than the way you interpret this your own poem creation.
Blessings, your way....
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
Comment from Indie Skreet
yes, you definitely do things better in less words - maybe that is the answer for you and then people may read you because they actually want to and not just for the extra f/s bucks, Indie
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yes, you definitely do things better in less words - maybe that is the answer for you and then people may read you because they actually want to and not just for the extra f/s bucks, Indie
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
Comment from Neelam Sangwai
If He is breathing the same air, He seems to be alive within us. A person like us. I appreciate this concept. The content is high but in poetic expressions without rhyme or internal rhyme the high words lose their beauty. -Neelam
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If He is breathing the same air, He seems to be alive within us. A person like us. I appreciate this concept. The content is high but in poetic expressions without rhyme or internal rhyme the high words lose their beauty. -Neelam
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
Comment from Bill Schott
I find that the message is God created a world for himself, so we are like him and he like us. The 'air' could be interpreted as the essence that we share.
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I find that the message is God created a world for himself, so we are like him and he like us. The 'air' could be interpreted as the essence that we share.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
Comment from linsbm
You've used a tanka format for this spiritual poem. Well laid advices in expressing God's blessings in your own language and artistic presentation. Thanks for sharing.
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You've used a tanka format for this spiritual poem. Well laid advices in expressing God's blessings in your own language and artistic presentation. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
Comment from steevie
Interesting concept you have that you would put God on the same level as us. I don't think that will fly well with the superior authorities, man!
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Interesting concept you have that you would put God on the same level as us. I don't think that will fly well with the superior authorities, man!
Comment Written 23-Mar-2013
