O My God and Mother Nature!
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Comment from Bloomer Burbs
Hi Alcreator
have God faith; be blest
pass His tests, serve man selfless
earn status per work
live in free infinite gifts
feel pride; He too breathes same air
Interesting to read an ode to the great man himself. I find it quite difficult to fully understand you poem. For example, What is His test?
Take care, Pete
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Hi Alcreator
have God faith; be blest
pass His tests, serve man selfless
earn status per work
live in free infinite gifts
feel pride; He too breathes same air
Interesting to read an ode to the great man himself. I find it quite difficult to fully understand you poem. For example, What is His test?
Take care, Pete
Comment Written 25-Jun-2021
Comment from kahpot
A lot of stipulations on who or who cannot review, I would like to think that anyone on FS. has the right to learn, read, and explore the feelings of others, as I have not published anything I feel a bit left out, none the less I enjoyed this work****kahpot
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A lot of stipulations on who or who cannot review, I would like to think that anyone on FS. has the right to learn, read, and explore the feelings of others, as I have not published anything I feel a bit left out, none the less I enjoyed this work****kahpot
Comment Written 25-Jun-2021
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It is inspirational and has a positive message. It's beautifully written. Excellent work! Thank you for sharing! I like it.
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I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It is inspirational and has a positive message. It's beautifully written. Excellent work! Thank you for sharing! I like it.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2021
Comment from Boogienights
I honestly like this better then some I've read of yours lately. This one was much better written, with a clear understandable message. Well done, thanks for sharing. :)
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I honestly like this better then some I've read of yours lately. This one was much better written, with a clear understandable message. Well done, thanks for sharing. :)
Comment Written 24-Jun-2021
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You're warning for language surprised me and then after I read I am still wondering why. Oh well, I enjoyed reading this poem and your words ring true. If we'd follow them, we would all be better off and have a better relationship with God.
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You're warning for language surprised me and then after I read I am still wondering why. Oh well, I enjoyed reading this poem and your words ring true. If we'd follow them, we would all be better off and have a better relationship with God.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2021
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
A fine spiritual poem that reminds one to keep the faith. GOD is the one and the only one, the creator of all the universe. God is the eternal truth beyond infinity. Thank you for sharing.
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A fine spiritual poem that reminds one to keep the faith. GOD is the one and the only one, the creator of all the universe. God is the eternal truth beyond infinity. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2021
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An up lifting faithful write about belief and living one's life with the blessing of God. I enjoyed the positivity in your words here which are well meaning, love Dolly x
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An up lifting faithful write about belief and living one's life with the blessing of God. I enjoyed the positivity in your words here which are well meaning, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Jun-2021
Comment from royowen
I don't actually think the Spirit person of God actually breathes, He is the very breath of life, the one who rebirths us with His Spirit, but the very essence of life itself, "the way, the truth and the life." John 14:6. Beautifully written, blessings riy
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I don't actually think the Spirit person of God actually breathes, He is the very breath of life, the one who rebirths us with His Spirit, but the very essence of life itself, "the way, the truth and the life." John 14:6. Beautifully written, blessings riy
Comment Written 23-Jun-2021
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
have God faith; be blest5
pass His tests, serve man selfless7
earn status per work5
live in free infinite gifts7
feel pride; He too breathes same air7
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Nice free verse about this and that and how we exist in our own world of illusions. A very unique poem and interesting wording.
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have God faith; be blest5
pass His tests, serve man selfless7
earn status per work5
live in free infinite gifts7
feel pride; He too breathes same air7
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Nice free verse about this and that and how we exist in our own world of illusions. A very unique poem and interesting wording.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2021
Comment from amada
This is a great poem about God, confidence, and those tests that it is supposed to bless us. I like the sentiment in your words, your strength and your conviction. We always need a ray of hop in these trying times of tribulation.
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This is a great poem about God, confidence, and those tests that it is supposed to bless us. I like the sentiment in your words, your strength and your conviction. We always need a ray of hop in these trying times of tribulation.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2021
