Comment from Pseudoname

Excellent

AW,

As always, something in the way your words challenge the conventions of native English speaking lends added authority to your work. A fitting reminder that the Lord still walks with us. For that I thank you again.

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2006

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2006

THANKS A LOT FOR THIS AUTHENTIC REVIEW WITH APPRECIATION I DO APPRECIATE.

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

HI ALCREATOR, Yes I enjoyed the spiritual write. You have sent a strong message in few words, man should take care of this earth, God breathes the same air.
gert

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2006

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2006

THANKS A LOT FOR THE REVIEW WITH RIGHT MESSAGE APPRECIATION I DO APPRECIATE MUCH.

Comment from zhaphyr

Good

I have a problem with anything or anyone who tells me how to worship God. It is just plain irritating. Regardless, I have to give credit where credit is due. The poem is well written. You only have four stars because I can't relate the spiritual awe for God the picture inspires in me to the religious instruction in the poem. I see the 3 crosses in fanartreview more appropriate for this. That is just a personal perspective tho'.

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2006

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2006

THANKS FOR THIS REVIEW WITH HONEST FEELING I DO APPRECIATE.

Comment from deboftherockies

Excellent

Pass his tests,serve man selfless. Live in free infinite gifts. These are very good! I too , believe this to be true. The e Art in this poem is perfect. Sets off this work wonderfully.

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2006

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2006

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Comment from mslink1

Excellent

Yes, Al, we should feel honored for we do indeed breathe of His life force.
You shall be judge "by your works." I'm still working and trying to add brownie points to my list,lol.
God's gifts are free and are mankind's for the asking. Love this short poem that speaks with such a loud voice, Mary.

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2006

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2006

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Comment from drivenbackward

Excellent

Nicely done. I actually grasped this one right away (not easy with your work sometimes). You really pointed out such important aspects of life in so few words. I wish I could read a poem like this every day. It really is uplifting. Thank you.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2006

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2006

THANKS A LOT FOR THIS REVIEW I DO APPRECIATE.

Comment from khaarina

Average

This just doesn't open anything up for me. It feels like it is just telling us what to do rather than inspring us. I think this one could use some work.

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 Comment Written 15-Aug-2006

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2006

Thanks.

Comment from joyshri

Excellent

Nice one! Simple and brief with a wonderful choice of words and thoughts. If we could follow the wishes expressed life would be better. Nice word rhythm and alliteration.Joyshri.

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2006

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2006

THANKS A LOT FOR THIS NICE REVIEW I DO APPRECIATE.

Comment from mamre07

Excellent

This poem is short but every word is worth its weight in gold. It is an encouragement. Thanks for the great post that flows well with vivid images.

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2006

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2006

THANKS A LOT FOR THIS HONEST REVIEW WITH THE HIGHEST ORDER OF APPRECIATION I DO APPRECIATE MUCH.

Comment from DEEPTI GUPTA

Good

Hi ALCREATOR WRITER !
Your spiritual poem is quite exuberant !!
" Live in free infinite gifts ,
Feel pride, He too breathes the same air . "

Very true - in few words you have expressed a lot. The picture above your poems perfectly matches with your lines and enhaces its beauty .........!!!!!!!!!
Warm wishes
Deepti

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2006

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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2006

Thanks for the review.

You have highlighted the most crucial aspects of the poem very nicely.

Your rating standard is not understood. Would you please clarify why is the controversy. Is it a part of a high elevated national style? I am keen to know more of your standard of rating in course of writing reviews. Being a reviewer too, I can learn or follow your rating principle if I find it is acceptable.

I do hope you would feel free to write me about your norm of rating at FS. It is evident your rating does not match with your words in appreciation.

Once I know I can improve in my writing since you are the only reviewer offered me this poor rating where the explanation is not clear so I am interested to know more.

You would appreciate once I know your stand of rating I need not write so many words unnecessarily.

Wishing you every success,
best regards,