Comment from seewhatimwritingnow

Excellent

I see, per your note, that the grammar here is intentional. So this would be a puzzle of sorts? I shall try to interpret!

Have God faith; be blest. (Have faith in God and be blest)
Pass His tests, serve man selfless. (Do as He commands, serving mankind selflessly)
Earn status per work, (You will be commended per the quality of your work)
Live in free infinite gifts (Enjoy life with his free gifts)
Feel pride; He too breathes same air. (Be proud that you are breathing the same air that God breathes)

Thanks for sharing. Betty

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2013

Comment from soniafogal

Good

The poem is clear and communicates a message with which I agree. The writing itself is good but didn't provoke any strong emotions or images for me.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2013

Comment from allborn66

Excellent

This is a very interesting piece. You express your theme well. It is presented logically. I like the flow of the poem. Barbara

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2013

Comment from harmony13

Excellent

An Eccentric Poem! I liked this poem and understood what
the author was conveying. It was extremely thought provoking and the read flowed. The artwork was great
and enhanced the read. Thank you, harmony13

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2013

Comment from gazzagodbod

Excellent

Now I understand this one and he is indeed among us well written my friend I loved it thank you for sharing it my friend gazza

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2013

Comment from Xnorp

Excellent

Many optional questions and optional answers on each line. Every reader can ask or answer diffrently. Depending on their experience. Well written, the reader becomes involved.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2013

Comment from Righteous Riter

Excellent

I'm feeling this message here. It's like the writer is writing this to me personally. The message is felt in my heart as I feel as one with this piece.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2013

Comment from Rmocruz

Excellent

An uplifting message presented in this spiritual free verse.
I have tried to employ poetic license in the past, only to
Suffer the "slings and arrows of outrageous fortune."
A wonderfully written poem.
Rich.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2013

Comment from kintesiegel

Excellent

Okay, I like the message. It makes sense and is a good one to follow. You have wrapped this up very nicely in very few words.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2006

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2006

THANK YOU.

Comment from EmileJP

Excellent

Beautiful sentiments and a graceful approach to the mysteries of our spiritual lives. A touching, gentle, and poetic look at what we are and what we strive to be.

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2006

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2006

THANKS FOR THIS NICE REVIEW WITH HIGHEST ORDER OF APPRECIATION I DO APPRECIATE MUCH.