O My God and Mother Nature!
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Comment from God's Writer
A sermon in this awesome poem. So crystal clear. I also have felt blessed by your wonderful poems. Thank you for this grand write.
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A sermon in this awesome poem. So crystal clear. I also have felt blessed by your wonderful poems. Thank you for this grand write.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2013
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well written my friend I liked the subject matter and it reads very well something we all have to be reminded of at times well done regards Jill
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Yes this is well written my friend I liked the subject matter and it reads very well something we all have to be reminded of at times well done regards Jill
Comment Written 21-Mar-2013
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your well-written tanka effectively conveys the theme that, when we serve man, we please God. Yes, there are rewards awaiting in Heaven.
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Your well-written tanka effectively conveys the theme that, when we serve man, we please God. Yes, there are rewards awaiting in Heaven.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2013
Comment from Titanx9
My friend, this reminds me of the theme of our church, Love God, love people." Having God's faith is to believe in Him, because He said the just shall live by faith! Moreover, the greatest commandment of all is to Love God with all our hearts, mind, and soul and to love our neighbors as ourselves. I so enjoyed this 5/7/5/7/7 poem. Be blessed! Dossie
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My friend, this reminds me of the theme of our church, Love God, love people." Having God's faith is to believe in Him, because He said the just shall live by faith! Moreover, the greatest commandment of all is to Love God with all our hearts, mind, and soul and to love our neighbors as ourselves. I so enjoyed this 5/7/5/7/7 poem. Be blessed! Dossie
Comment Written 21-Mar-2013
Comment from MM lives on :)
Nice work here pal.. it was well written
And expressed for all to understand
Great use of imagery as well
Thanks for sharing always a pleasure
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Nice work here pal.. it was well written
And expressed for all to understand
Great use of imagery as well
Thanks for sharing always a pleasure
Comment Written 21-Mar-2013
Comment from Rondeno
Support the capitalist status quo, don't complain, know your place, don't upset other people's cushy arrangements, and you, too will be blessed. I think I've got it now!
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Support the capitalist status quo, don't complain, know your place, don't upset other people's cushy arrangements, and you, too will be blessed. I think I've got it now!
Comment Written 21-Mar-2013
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Alcreator,
You have penned a good poem in your own style. Your words are descriptive and quite clever. Your message comes though loud and clear. Well done, chey
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Hi Alcreator,
You have penned a good poem in your own style. Your words are descriptive and quite clever. Your message comes though loud and clear. Well done, chey
Comment Written 21-Mar-2013
Comment from amahra
Don't think I've ever heard of that style. But you did say it was your own. You should introduce that to a contest. See how many can write a poem following your style and they can earn real money or site money.
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Don't think I've ever heard of that style. But you did say it was your own. You should introduce that to a contest. See how many can write a poem following your style and they can earn real money or site money.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2013
Comment from ravenblack
finally! I do understand this one. but still, you need to be careful w/language. have god faith? understand what you are saying, but usage is odd. blest - again, no what you are saying, but it should be blessed. status per work - sounds too much like an accountant. don't think status or per are the words you are looking for. I do like " He too breathes same air".
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finally! I do understand this one. but still, you need to be careful w/language. have god faith? understand what you are saying, but usage is odd. blest - again, no what you are saying, but it should be blessed. status per work - sounds too much like an accountant. don't think status or per are the words you are looking for. I do like " He too breathes same air".
Comment Written 21-Mar-2013
Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER
A buffet beginning each line with.."have, pass, earn, live and free then embellishing them with nouns that emulate all the spiritual bells and whistles. An interesting read, smooth and lyrical.
Regards:
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A buffet beginning each line with.."have, pass, earn, live and free then embellishing them with nouns that emulate all the spiritual bells and whistles. An interesting read, smooth and lyrical.
Regards:
Comment Written 21-Mar-2013
