O My God and Mother Nature!
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "B' Blest!"Appreciation of God and Mother Nature
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Comment from LovnPeace
I find nothing to fault. I meet all your qualifications to review this. As you said Poetic license is allowable. Much different style is not pleasant for all to read, but it carries much truth. Blessings. Barbara
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I find nothing to fault. I meet all your qualifications to review this. As you said Poetic license is allowable. Much different style is not pleasant for all to read, but it carries much truth. Blessings. Barbara
Comment Written 29-Jun-2021
Comment from AliMom
I love your declaration of faith written pretty much in a series of directives. It reminds believers that what God expects from us, He also gives. I also like the use of "blest" as opposed to blessed. It makes it more personal.
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I love your declaration of faith written pretty much in a series of directives. It reminds believers that what God expects from us, He also gives. I also like the use of "blest" as opposed to blessed. It makes it more personal.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2021
Comment from Aussie
'Faith is the evidence of things not yet seen.' Bible. I agree with your poem. We are not here for ourselves. We are servants of the Lord. Without faith it is impossible to please God. Everything we have, everything we do, do it for others, give all. A man asked Jesus, "if a man asks for my singlet, what shall I do?" Jesus replied, "give him your coat also. I liked you poem, wanted more. K XX
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'Faith is the evidence of things not yet seen.' Bible. I agree with your poem. We are not here for ourselves. We are servants of the Lord. Without faith it is impossible to please God. Everything we have, everything we do, do it for others, give all. A man asked Jesus, "if a man asks for my singlet, what shall I do?" Jesus replied, "give him your coat also. I liked you poem, wanted more. K XX
Comment Written 26-Jun-2021
Comment from elchupakabra
I thought you used a really subtle alliteration here: serve man selfless
I also enjoyed the line - He too breathes same Air / at the least, it's refreshing to see it presented more as equals.
Good work, thanks for sharing. Later daze.
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I thought you used a really subtle alliteration here: serve man selfless
I also enjoyed the line - He too breathes same Air / at the least, it's refreshing to see it presented more as equals.
Good work, thanks for sharing. Later daze.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2021
Comment from Ulla
You've written a wonderful spiritual poem here. I'm so glad that you have your faith and want to share It with us all. You have your unique way of expressing your feelings. All best, Ulla:)
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You've written a wonderful spiritual poem here. I'm so glad that you have your faith and want to share It with us all. You have your unique way of expressing your feelings. All best, Ulla:)
Comment Written 26-Jun-2021
Comment from dragonpoet
Yes, this poem reminds us of the life we should live to be welcomed into Heaven. Though I think the air is probably cleaner in Heaven.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
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Yes, this poem reminds us of the life we should live to be welcomed into Heaven. Though I think the air is probably cleaner in Heaven.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 26-Jun-2021
Comment from Bonnie Seach
Dedication and devotion speak out.
Well thought out and attractively planned.
I sympathize with the author for his struggle to present it as he desires.
With determination and creativity a good writer usually succeeds. We must not give up.
Thank you for sharing.
Wishing you every success. Kind regards
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Dedication and devotion speak out.
Well thought out and attractively planned.
I sympathize with the author for his struggle to present it as he desires.
With determination and creativity a good writer usually succeeds. We must not give up.
Thank you for sharing.
Wishing you every success. Kind regards
Comment Written 26-Jun-2021
Comment from jake cosmos aller
nicely done poem about finding God in the everyday world all around us. I am not a Christian but I am not an atheist either - if anything I am either a pagan, Wiccan or Buddhist.
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nicely done poem about finding God in the everyday world all around us. I am not a Christian but I am not an atheist either - if anything I am either a pagan, Wiccan or Buddhist.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2021
Comment from karenina
Poem of faith in your unique voice... No one can ever accuse you of conforming to any but your own inimitable style! The lack of punctuation allows the reader to stop/pause/consider in a myriad of ways... Nice.
Karenina
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Poem of faith in your unique voice... No one can ever accuse you of conforming to any but your own inimitable style! The lack of punctuation allows the reader to stop/pause/consider in a myriad of ways... Nice.
Karenina
Comment Written 26-Jun-2021
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
A beautiful spiritual poem full of faith and hope in God's magnificent glory. This is a wonderful poem displaying the signs of a deep and true faith and sharing it in this way makes it possible for others to feel the power of the Lord in our hearts and souls. Well done and God bless you kindest regards Meia x
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A beautiful spiritual poem full of faith and hope in God's magnificent glory. This is a wonderful poem displaying the signs of a deep and true faith and sharing it in this way makes it possible for others to feel the power of the Lord in our hearts and souls. Well done and God bless you kindest regards Meia x
Comment Written 25-Jun-2021
