Comment from fretless

Excellent

This poem is very complex and will be hard for some to understand right off the bat, but I caught the drift. Its a good thing you had explanations for all the slang beneath the poem. Nicely done. It was a strong piece and beautifully written.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2021

Comment from royowen

Excellent

There will be stormy days in life, as well as the literal kind. I think we all have experienced them, they only stay for a season, but like the nighttime sorrows, joy cometh in the morning. Psalm 30:5. Well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2021

Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

This I think is a dark poem but the pink background gives it a soft touch so I am not really sure its nicely planned out though thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013

THANKS FOR THIS REVIEW.

Comment from J.R Dickinson

Excellent

Another beautiful poem. It strangely reminded me of my time in Florida last summer when there were a lot of thunder storms, and it also reminded me of sailors on the high sea in a massive storm. You gave me multiple images with your small illustration. Excellent job and nice choice with your picture. That especially lured me in.

Sincerely,

J.R

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013

THANKS FOR PROFESSIONAL REVIEW.

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

This one is poetically different than others I have read of yours. Yet, it still feels as though you are proclaiming a divine intravention into daily life ... I like this one. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013

THANKS FOR QUEST REVIEW.

Comment from Mai Mai

Excellent

This is an interesting piece. It draws a picture full of duality and imagery that gives vision to its reader. Good job and good luck.

Mai Mai

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013

THANKS FOR NICE REVIEW.

Comment from ravenblack

Needs Improvement

you do capture what I presume to be a tsunami. problem is, the lines are so disjointed and, at points, nonsensical that , well, the poem disappeared beneath a wave. " you strike men!" huh? men on strike, huh? " sprout genes" - what does genetics have to do with it? please, take some of these reviews to heart and strive for coherence

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 Comment Written 30-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013

THANKS.

Comment from 9999pool

Excellent

The wrath of the waves - its fury and energy can consume everything along its way like the tsunami. No forewarning and man must fend for themselves and save their own souls to avoid the danger of the powerful waves.
Good write and expressed in 5-7-5-7-5-7-7-7. Well done.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013

THANKS FOR BEAUTIFUL REVIEW.

reply by 9999pool on 01-Apr-2013

Welcome. Cheers, Ritchie.

Comment from EMB

Excellent

I found this particular poem to be one of motivation and inspiration. It has a sort of "cloud with a silver lining" feel that offers hope during times of struggle.

Very nice.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013

THANKS FOR INSPIRATIONAL REVIEW.

Comment from donaldww

Excellent

Oh My God continues with Old Wave. The words are presented in a hitherto never before seen laconic form of rhetorical imprecision, precisely when faiths find sunshine, glow and sprout genes, and lives smile, facing ol' dark days.

Here's to the upcoming days of light!

Cheers,
DW

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013

THANKS FOR YOUR DEDICATED PROFESSIONAL REVIEW.