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Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "In My Room"I dare you....
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Comment from Beatlegirl61
I enjoyed the dreamy feel to this brilliant piece! I like the way you have conveyed your thoughts and message through a dream-like state! Nicely done and I enjoyed the 'experience'!! Good writing and good reading!
Take care and be well...Carol ::)
'beatle' quote today: "Because the world is round...it turns me on..."
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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2006
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I enjoyed the dreamy feel to this brilliant piece! I like the way you have conveyed your thoughts and message through a dream-like state! Nicely done and I enjoyed the 'experience'!! Good writing and good reading!
Take care and be well...Carol ::)
'beatle' quote today: "Because the world is round...it turns me on..."
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Comment Written 13-Aug-2006
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2006
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thanx lots! :-)
Comment from Focused True North
Very creative, Shelley! You've done a good job here. Enjoyed the rapid-paced imagery. I liked the ending, too. Dreams can be very amazing things!
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2006
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Very creative, Shelley! You've done a good job here. Enjoyed the rapid-paced imagery. I liked the ending, too. Dreams can be very amazing things!
Comment Written 12-Aug-2006
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2006
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hehe thanx lots! :-)
Comment from Lisloh
Are you serious? Did you pass? Please.....
Shelley, you are too talented, if there is such a thing....
"In My Room" Yeah, you flew through this challenge with flying colours..
Awesome imagery---true to life content---then you take it to a dream...
Good Show!
Thank you for creating this and sharing.
Take care & be safe
Lisloh
Excellent presentation! Excellent!
How many words are allowed in a challenge? Been trying to think of one for you and have a couple of ideas....
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2006
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Are you serious? Did you pass? Please.....
Shelley, you are too talented, if there is such a thing....
"In My Room" Yeah, you flew through this challenge with flying colours..
Awesome imagery---true to life content---then you take it to a dream...
Good Show!
Thank you for creating this and sharing.
Take care & be safe
Lisloh
Excellent presentation! Excellent!
How many words are allowed in a challenge? Been trying to think of one for you and have a couple of ideas....
Comment Written 11-Aug-2006
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2006
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most give four words or a phrase either one
thanx lots!! :-)
Comment from CarolinasAngel
You can write about just about anything and make it work. The flow and all is very good in this, Shelley. I didn't see anything wrong with this.
Candy
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2006
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You can write about just about anything and make it work. The flow and all is very good in this, Shelley. I didn't see anything wrong with this.
Candy
Comment Written 11-Aug-2006
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2006
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i try LOL
thanx lots! :-)
Comment from KING SLATON
Rock and roll posters and ballerinas spinning around together in the same room. Hmmm....I was in a rock band for years and noone would allow ballerinas arund us. Great write.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2006
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Rock and roll posters and ballerinas spinning around together in the same room. Hmmm....I was in a rock band for years and noone would allow ballerinas arund us. Great write.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2006
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2006
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hmm i wonder why lol ;-)
Comment from rl dubour
In My Room---well my goodness you have done a really good job on your exam I would have given you an A -PLUS, BUT HOWEVER you didn't put them in order in which they were given to you, or did you? lol--only kidding, You did a very good job with this. :)
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2006
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In My Room---well my goodness you have done a really good job on your exam I would have given you an A -PLUS, BUT HOWEVER you didn't put them in order in which they were given to you, or did you? lol--only kidding, You did a very good job with this. :)
Comment Written 11-Aug-2006
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2006
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ha
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thanx lots for your continued support.... it means more than you will ever know! :-)
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lol--I saw that smile!!!--that's a good thing! :)
I might do one later on sex and the internet thinking about it anyway-maybe
Comment from Norbanus
What a hell of a combination of words to string down the page in your little poetic gem. Even I can't complain about it not rhymin' or a chimin'.
Way to go.
Norbanus
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2006
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What a hell of a combination of words to string down the page in your little poetic gem. Even I can't complain about it not rhymin' or a chimin'.
Way to go.
Norbanus
Comment Written 10-Aug-2006
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2006
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LOL!!
thanx lots! :-)
Comment from sengwriter
Shelley,
For the last couple of days I was dumped with some problems and literally stopped reading you all too. Sorry for that...
Now let me say.....
Dreams you dream always with a tune of utter reality....
Here first of all the words offered to you by Wendy are all used
very wisely and judiciously.
One notable point of your style that you've used those challenged words each in separate stanzas and thus your dream gets new diamension each time.
Lastly you've taken the title "In My Room" from the challengers lines of review ~ Wendy too used these words which are there in her room.
Ok. I liked it.
Gautam
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2006
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Shelley,
For the last couple of days I was dumped with some problems and literally stopped reading you all too. Sorry for that...
Now let me say.....
Dreams you dream always with a tune of utter reality....
Here first of all the words offered to you by Wendy are all used
very wisely and judiciously.
One notable point of your style that you've used those challenged words each in separate stanzas and thus your dream gets new diamension each time.
Lastly you've taken the title "In My Room" from the challengers lines of review ~ Wendy too used these words which are there in her room.
Ok. I liked it.
Gautam
Comment Written 10-Aug-2006
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2006
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lol
thank you lots! :-)
Comment from luna
You passed with flying colors honey, you always do. I don't even wonder if you're gonna anymore, I just know that you will. I'm about ready to issue you another challenge, this will be like what my third to you? Scept this one will not be so easy as the others. I have to think on it, but rest assured it's coming, and I know you'll pass it as well.
Your friend,
Jenny *smile*
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2006
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You passed with flying colors honey, you always do. I don't even wonder if you're gonna anymore, I just know that you will. I'm about ready to issue you another challenge, this will be like what my third to you? Scept this one will not be so easy as the others. I have to think on it, but rest assured it's coming, and I know you'll pass it as well.
Your friend,
Jenny *smile*
Comment Written 10-Aug-2006
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2006
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lol
thanx lots!! :-)
Comment from Joe_Jenkins
I'd say you pass on that one. I liked the way that you put the reader into some kind of dream state in the way it is written (I don't mean you send people to sleep by that).
Good flow and pace.
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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2006
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I'd say you pass on that one. I liked the way that you put the reader into some kind of dream state in the way it is written (I don't mean you send people to sleep by that).
Good flow and pace.
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Comment Written 10-Aug-2006
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2006
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thank you :-)
