2024 Japanese Poetry
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Yes, there were strong women in the Bible that assisted Jesus with His ministry. I also find it interesting that the women were the first to see Jesus after He arose. Thank you for sharing this poem with us.
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Yes, there were strong women in the Bible that assisted Jesus with His ministry. I also find it interesting that the women were the first to see Jesus after He arose. Thank you for sharing this poem with us.
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara 😊
Gypsy
Comment from gansach
Another stunningly artistic poem in the Ryokan style. The artwork is beautiful as is the presentation. Your colorful words paint a lovely story of love and devotion. Once again, an outstanding piece of work.
reply by the author on 18-May-2024
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Another stunningly artistic poem in the Ryokan style. The artwork is beautiful as is the presentation. Your colorful words paint a lovely story of love and devotion. Once again, an outstanding piece of work.
Comment Written 18-May-2024
reply by the author on 18-May-2024
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Thank you very much, Gansach
Gypsy
Comment from juliaSjames
This is composed with such heartfelt devotion that it touches the soul of the reader. The Magdalene is an enigmatic figure but it is clear from the gospels that she loved Jesus. Your exquisite poem triggered a memory of my schooldays. I learned a hymn that I still know by heart
"O Son of man
Our hero strong and tender" is how it begins. That's what comes to me when I think of Mary Magdalene and her feelings for Jesus.
Thank you for sharing
Blessings, Cheryl
reply by the author on 19-May-2024
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This is composed with such heartfelt devotion that it touches the soul of the reader. The Magdalene is an enigmatic figure but it is clear from the gospels that she loved Jesus. Your exquisite poem triggered a memory of my schooldays. I learned a hymn that I still know by heart
"O Son of man
Our hero strong and tender" is how it begins. That's what comes to me when I think of Mary Magdalene and her feelings for Jesus.
Thank you for sharing
Blessings, Cheryl
Comment Written 18-May-2024
reply by the author on 19-May-2024
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Thank you, Cheryl, what a beautiful hymn. I recently read a book called, "The Book of Longings" is a beautiful novel written by the famous author Sue Monk Kidd. The book is perfect for those who wants to read historical fiction. The story is about a poet called Ana, she falls in love with Jesus and they married. It's an interesting thought. Between Ana and Mary of Magdalena the poem was born. Jesus is such a beautiful person and God, it would be easy to fall in love with him.
Thank you very much, Cheryl I appreciate your detailed and insightful review 😊
Comment from kahpot
To love and to receive love unconditionally can only be from God, what a beautiful way of describing how a person can/could see this, a wonderful read and form, and an excellent form****kahpot
reply by the author on 18-May-2024
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To love and to receive love unconditionally can only be from God, what a beautiful way of describing how a person can/could see this, a wonderful read and form, and an excellent form****kahpot
Comment Written 17-May-2024
reply by the author on 18-May-2024
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Thank you very much, Kym
Gypsy
Comment from Idawiesenfeld
I loved how you captured this unique moment of falling in love. I liked how you used different colors and the pictures go really well with the poem. I loved how you asked rhetorical questions to the audience and makes us remember loving memories. Great job
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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I loved how you captured this unique moment of falling in love. I liked how you used different colors and the pictures go really well with the poem. I loved how you asked rhetorical questions to the audience and makes us remember loving memories. Great job
Comment Written 17-May-2024
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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Thank you very much, my friend. Have a wonderful weekend. Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
i loved the oceanic imagery
it was very calming and flowed smoothly
like the tide coming in and going out
a wonderful love poem!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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i loved the oceanic imagery
it was very calming and flowed smoothly
like the tide coming in and going out
a wonderful love poem!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 17-May-2024
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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Thank you very much, my friend. Have a wonderful weekend. Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
She was indeed the epítome of humility.shr clearly understood what it meant to love the Lord with your whole soul, heart and life
Beautiful words based on the life of a really great, but humnle woman.
RJ
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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She was indeed the epítome of humility.shr clearly understood what it meant to love the Lord with your whole soul, heart and life
Beautiful words based on the life of a really great, but humnle woman.
RJ
Comment Written 17-May-2024
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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Thank you very much, my friend. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
Comment from GWHARGIS
Oh I really like this. Perfect for reading it today. It's my husband and my twenty-seventh wedding anniversary. I felt this and added bonus that it was about Mary Magdalyn. This was great. Gretchen
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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Oh I really like this. Perfect for reading it today. It's my husband and my twenty-seventh wedding anniversary. I felt this and added bonus that it was about Mary Magdalyn. This was great. Gretchen
Comment Written 17-May-2024
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen. Happy anniversary!!!
Have a wonderful.
Gypsy
Comment from royowen
The wonderful thing about Mary she turned immediately from her ways and followed, what woman wouldn't fall in love with Jesus? But they could never go beyond that. Beautifully written Gypsy blessings Roy
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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The wonderful thing about Mary she turned immediately from her ways and followed, what woman wouldn't fall in love with Jesus? But they could never go beyond that. Beautifully written Gypsy blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-May-2024
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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Thank you very much, Roy.
Have a wonderful.
Gypsy
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Most welcome
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Most welcome
Comment from lyenochka
You really are a love/romance poet and you now soar with your writing gifts to write about the the love of the Lord and how you love Him and all that He does to show us His love for us! Beautiful!
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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You really are a love/romance poet and you now soar with your writing gifts to write about the the love of the Lord and how you love Him and all that He does to show us His love for us! Beautiful!
Comment Written 17-May-2024
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister. It's a fine line and not everybody understand, the love is deep and pure. I'm happy you like it. Have a wonderful weekend!
Love,
Marival
