Isla de Oro: A Pirate Story
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "The Remark"A story of bravery, faith, and family.
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Comment from PRACTICALLY PERFECT EDDE
Title: A Swashbuckling Tale of Courage and Betrayal
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Review:
"A riveting tale of high seas adventure, 'A Swashbuckling Tale of Courage and Betrayal' captivates from start to finish. The story follows Nathan and his crew aboard the Lady Rebecca as they navigate the treacherous waters of piracy and personal loss. The author skillfully weaves together themes of loyalty, resilience, and the relentless pursuit of justice.
The characters are richly developed, each grappling with their own inner demons and moral dilemmas. Nathan's struggle to reconcile his grief over his father's death with his newfound responsibilities drives the narrative forward, while his companions add depth and complexity to the story.
The dialogue crackles with tension and authenticity, transporting readers to a world of cutthroat pirates and daring escapes. From the thrilling battle scenes to the quieter moments of introspection, every page brims with excitement and emotion.
While the pacing occasionally falters in the middle section, the plot quickly regains its momentum, building to a gripping climax that leaves readers eagerly anticipating the next installment.
Overall, 'A Swashbuckling Tale of Courage and Betrayal' is a thrilling adventure that will appeal to fans of historical fiction and maritime adventure. Highly recommended!"
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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Title: A Swashbuckling Tale of Courage and Betrayal
Rating: â??â??â??â??
Review:
"A riveting tale of high seas adventure, 'A Swashbuckling Tale of Courage and Betrayal' captivates from start to finish. The story follows Nathan and his crew aboard the Lady Rebecca as they navigate the treacherous waters of piracy and personal loss. The author skillfully weaves together themes of loyalty, resilience, and the relentless pursuit of justice.
The characters are richly developed, each grappling with their own inner demons and moral dilemmas. Nathan's struggle to reconcile his grief over his father's death with his newfound responsibilities drives the narrative forward, while his companions add depth and complexity to the story.
The dialogue crackles with tension and authenticity, transporting readers to a world of cutthroat pirates and daring escapes. From the thrilling battle scenes to the quieter moments of introspection, every page brims with excitement and emotion.
While the pacing occasionally falters in the middle section, the plot quickly regains its momentum, building to a gripping climax that leaves readers eagerly anticipating the next installment.
Overall, 'A Swashbuckling Tale of Courage and Betrayal' is a thrilling adventure that will appeal to fans of historical fiction and maritime adventure. Highly recommended!"
Comment Written 15-May-2024
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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Thanks for putting my chapter into ChatGPT and letting me know what it says. A little careful editing of what it says would have been appreciated though.
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Your welcome and YES, we DID read it!!! WTG!!!
Comment from lancellot
I would say, well Captain, what is your idea of saving our skins? I think we find out in the next chapter with the nice way you set that ending.
This is well written. I do wonder how Keith hasn't been seen or suspected by now. Perhaps he has?
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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I would say, well Captain, what is your idea of saving our skins? I think we find out in the next chapter with the nice way you set that ending.
This is well written. I do wonder how Keith hasn't been seen or suspected by now. Perhaps he has?
Comment Written 14-May-2024
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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Thanks! Your perceptions of Keith and who may or may not be watching are insightful ;) Stay tuned.
