One More Climb
There may be one more mountain I must climb.14 total reviews
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Pat, your poem is penned in soft and soulful words, and it has good sensory appeal. Of special note:
Help me make it to the summit,
So I may behold all the beauty
(The "Summit" holds beauty beyond our wildest dreams.)
Perfect photo choice. Well done. Xo. M
reply by the author on 06-May-2024
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Hi Pat, your poem is penned in soft and soulful words, and it has good sensory appeal. Of special note:
Help me make it to the summit,
So I may behold all the beauty
(The "Summit" holds beauty beyond our wildest dreams.)
Perfect photo choice. Well done. Xo. M
Comment Written 06-May-2024
reply by the author on 06-May-2024
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Thank you for your review. Your reviews are always very special.
Comment from Mark Jackson
That is great. simple but a strong message of hope. A metaphor for life in general. Each challenge is a mountain but I question if I ever spend enough time enjoying the views between. Thank you.
reply by the author on 06-May-2024
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That is great. simple but a strong message of hope. A metaphor for life in general. Each challenge is a mountain but I question if I ever spend enough time enjoying the views between. Thank you.
Comment Written 06-May-2024
reply by the author on 06-May-2024
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Gratitude of our heart I wish you thank you for a very, very nice review
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Climbing mountains and viewing the scenes below is something I have done in the past. These days I am hoping those mountains are easier to climb, a poignant post Patricia, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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Climbing mountains and viewing the scenes below is something I have done in the past. These days I am hoping those mountains are easier to climb, a poignant post Patricia, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-May-2024
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read my work and to leave a nice review. It is appreciated.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Patricia,
This poem is a good wish/pray to get through life's problems. It is a beautiful photo that matches the words well.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Enjoy the rest of the day.
Joan
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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Hi Patricia,
This poem is a good wish/pray to get through life's problems. It is a beautiful photo that matches the words well.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Enjoy the rest of the day.
Joan
Comment Written 05-May-2024
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind review. I appreciate it very much.
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You are most kindly welcome, Patricia.
Joan
Comment from fm wright
This poem has a wonderful message. The words you have chosen flow together beautifully. If you do have any more mountains to climb, you're right, the Lord will help you with each step. May God bless you and keep you.
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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This poem has a wonderful message. The words you have chosen flow together beautifully. If you do have any more mountains to climb, you're right, the Lord will help you with each step. May God bless you and keep you.
Comment Written 05-May-2024
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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Thank you so much means a lot to me.
Comment from jim vecchio
Before your time is called, I hope there will be mountains of your words for me and the rest of FanStory to enjoy! That was a beautiful photo and reminder of the God that carries us over any challenge.
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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Before your time is called, I hope there will be mountains of your words for me and the rest of FanStory to enjoy! That was a beautiful photo and reminder of the God that carries us over any challenge.
Comment Written 05-May-2024
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to stop by my work and leave a nice review.
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Your work is always worth a positive review.
Comment from Wendy G
Yes, I believe you will, because you have such a positive and enthusiastic attitude, and your faith in the Saviour is strong. Yet He will accompany you on whatever mountains you face, and you can trust in His strength.
Wendy
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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Yes, I believe you will, because you have such a positive and enthusiastic attitude, and your faith in the Saviour is strong. Yet He will accompany you on whatever mountains you face, and you can trust in His strength.
Wendy
Comment Written 05-May-2024
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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Thank you so much for taking the time to review my work and leaving such a nice review.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
You are so right about it. I wish you the best no matter what mountain you will climb in life. Yes. You will always find beauty below. What you reach the summit, you will be in such a good mood so you will see beautiful things below.
My husband and I are getting ready to climb a real mountain in three weeks, the Inca/Machu Picchu trail. Looking forward to it.
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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You are so right about it. I wish you the best no matter what mountain you will climb in life. Yes. You will always find beauty below. What you reach the summit, you will be in such a good mood so you will see beautiful things below.
My husband and I are getting ready to climb a real mountain in three weeks, the Inca/Machu Picchu trail. Looking forward to it.
Comment Written 05-May-2024
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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Thank you so much for taking the time to review my work. I appreciate it very much.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and well written poem about wondering how many more mountains we have to climb before we can go home to be with our Lord! Beautiful imagery to go with your great words! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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This is a very beautiful and well written poem about wondering how many more mountains we have to climb before we can go home to be with our Lord! Beautiful imagery to go with your great words! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 04-May-2024
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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I am grateful to get nicer reviews. Thank you.
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You always write such encouraging words with lovely imagery. Just don't give up. Someone needs those words. I am one that needs them my friend! love and blessings, Teri
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your poem and beautiful picture of your snow capped Mountain -
As your journey comes to an end, and mine as well, I am reminded that in life, no matter what one's belief - all roads finally lead to the top
- Our journeys end will find us both there- with the Lord - the view will amaze-Bless - Alan
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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I like your poem and beautiful picture of your snow capped Mountain -
As your journey comes to an end, and mine as well, I am reminded that in life, no matter what one's belief - all roads finally lead to the top
- Our journeys end will find us both there- with the Lord - the view will amaze-Bless - Alan
Comment Written 04-May-2024
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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With the heart and gratitude wish to thank you for a very nice review.
