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Yabba Dabba Doo! Shelley's Back!

I missed you!

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Comment from Esther Brown
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OK, lovely. Have to admit I loved the picture most. I want to see a picture of the man under the hat. I need to know who Shelley is? Your muse? Your unseen spiritual advisor and poet of great renown? Off to read the second coming. I am reading "soul writing" from Jenkins, the author of the left behind series. Esther

 Comment Written 04-May-2024

Comment from shelley kaye
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LOL!!! omg thank you for the shout-out!!

and this was a great yabba dabba doo poem
with a fun and smooth flow
though the rhyme should be abba - (as in "yABBA dABBA" lol - i know the stupid example had a different scheme - that'll teach me to always check all examples before i post :-P

anyway, a great poem!!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 04-May-2024

Comment from patcelaw
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This is an interesting poem that you have written for this club event. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and may you have a wonderful weekend. May God bless you. Patricia .

 Comment Written 04-May-2024


reply by the author on 04-May-2024
    Thank you! Each week, I have learned so much from Shelley in her club.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. Yes, Shelly is a master poet. I didn't really count her as missing because I still read her poems for that month challenge, she participated it. I had fun reading your poem

 Comment Written 04-May-2024


reply by the author on 04-May-2024
    I know she wasn't relly gone. Just wanted her to know I missed her weekly lessons.
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Jim,
You did well with this yabba dabba do poem in honor of Shelly our Potlatch Club leader and fanstory master writer.
She was missed on her month off to write her poem a day for the NaPoWriMo prompt.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a wonderful weekend.
Joan

 Comment Written 04-May-2024


reply by the author on 04-May-2024
    Thank you very much! God Bless!
reply by dragonpoet on 04-May-2024
    You're welcome, Jim Same to you.
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
    Many Blessings!