An Ocean of Dreams
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Month of May"NaPoWriMo contest entry
5 total reviews
Comment from nancyjam
The words in your poem give the reader a feeling of the tranquility you speak of. Wonderful use of imagery to accomplish it.
I wish you the best in the contest.
Nancy
reply by the author on 06-May-2024
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The words in your poem give the reader a feeling of the tranquility you speak of. Wonderful use of imagery to accomplish it.
I wish you the best in the contest.
Nancy
Comment Written 03-May-2024
reply by the author on 06-May-2024
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Hi Nancy, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This poem is full of good and colorful imagery. The photo matches perfectly and fully supports your descriptive words. Thank you for sharing this. I enjoyed reviewing this.
Best wishes!
reply by the author on 06-May-2024
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This poem is full of good and colorful imagery. The photo matches perfectly and fully supports your descriptive words. Thank you for sharing this. I enjoyed reviewing this.
Best wishes!
Comment Written 03-May-2024
reply by the author on 06-May-2024
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Hi Alexandra, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from zanya
These sentiments are so true - May is the most exquisitely beautiful month in the calendar when nature is at her most fresh and new - thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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These sentiments are so true - May is the most exquisitely beautiful month in the calendar when nature is at her most fresh and new - thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-May-2024
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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Hi zanya, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very short poem, and I enjoyed listening to it very much. It would've been a bit better for me vision wise if you had used darker font on it because of my vision, they contrast needs to be there and you don't have as much contrast as I need. Patricia .
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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This is a very short poem, and I enjoyed listening to it very much. It would've been a bit better for me vision wise if you had used darker font on it because of my vision, they contrast needs to be there and you don't have as much contrast as I need. Patricia .
Comment Written 02-May-2024
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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hi Patricia, sorry about my colors again. I will try to go in and change them. Thank you for your comments and review. Donna
Comment from Bill Schott
This four-line poem, Month of May, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that the first new life SPRINGS forward now and awakens the observers' spirits.
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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This four-line poem, Month of May, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that the first new life SPRINGS forward now and awakens the observers' spirits.
Comment Written 02-May-2024
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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Hi Bill, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
