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Writer's Block

Scupting a Story

5 total reviews 
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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Yes, we have all been through this haven't we. I love how you've chiselled the words out that weren't flowing freely. Determination succeeded. A 5-7-5 poem that we can all relate too, Ginda. Well done.
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 05-May-2024


reply by the author on 06-May-2024
    Thank you, Valda, for reviewing and comments on my work.
Comment from tempeste
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Ciao mystery poet! You now have 4 votes.

Most entries were similar yours and Lost for Words stood out .

I chose yours for originality

I loved the idea to crack open the block wall and chisel out words.

Your brilliant poem deserves to win by far .

 Comment Written 03-May-2024


reply by the author on 07-May-2024
    Thank you so much for your vote of confidence.
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very neat and creative 5-7-5 poem you have penned about how to get rid of writer's block. You used very good words and very cute imagery to go with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 03-May-2024


reply by the author on 03-May-2024
    Thank you for your kind review, Teri.
Comment from Sallyo
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This is the first optimistic one I've read in this contest. Bravo! And the whole chiselling thing is a grand analogy. Sometimes it does feel like a coalface.

 Comment Written 01-May-2024


reply by the author on 02-May-2024
    Thanks, Sallyo.
Comment from RodG
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An appropriate metaphor. Don't we all use "hammers" and "chisels" to sculpt our poems and stories? Sometimes we have to break through the "rock" to find them. Rod

 Comment Written 01-May-2024


reply by the author on 02-May-2024
    Thanks, Rod.