Empty swing
5-7-5 poem2 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
This was a great 5-7-5 poem for the prompt. You got the syllable count right, and you described a great memory-provoking scene. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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This was a great 5-7-5 poem for the prompt. You got the syllable count right, and you described a great memory-provoking scene. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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Thank you dear jessi <3
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
This is a sad poem. It seems to evoke the idea of a child who died young and left this as a memory for the grieving parents. It could also be about children just growing out of using swing sets. In the latter case, the laughter can be relived with grandchildren.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day and week.
Joan
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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Hi
This is a sad poem. It seems to evoke the idea of a child who died young and left this as a memory for the grieving parents. It could also be about children just growing out of using swing sets. In the latter case, the laughter can be relived with grandchildren.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day and week.
Joan
Comment Written 28-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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Thank you dear joan <3
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No problem/
Joan
