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Counting Ballots 6

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Comment from BethShelby
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I would think a wind tunnel would fly the ballot counters themselves into the dumpster at the end of tunnel. What do I know, I've never been in a wind tunnel. I'm probably gettint it confused with the CERN tunnel.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
    Apparently this is how they check ballots in California. You read it here first.
Comment from EeanBlack
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I think it's a shame that we use our platform to go political. I'm here to read and learn how to write prose and poetry. Oh well, it was kinda funny. I like the fake Latin, oooorrrrr was it true Latin? I don't know Latin...lol
Good script.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
    This is not political, Eean. Pons and Ned are just all-American boys killing a bit of time before they get famous.
reply by EeanBlack on 28-Apr-2024
    Sorry, we all perceive things differently. My mistake.
Comment from jim vecchio
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Very good, in the usual style I've come to expect in these posts. One small concern, however: In Sak's third quote, you spelled "different"...er, different. I know because...well, never mind!

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
    Fixed it. Thank you, Jim
reply by jim vecchio on 27-Apr-2024
    It wasn't a biggie, but some reviewers hold that sort of thing against us.
Comment from Gloria ....
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This is a snapshot of reality. I've heard that Lara Trump has arranged for 100,000 committed poll workers to descend on all 81 states during voting.

I'm not sure where she got the additional 31 states from, so I'm chalking it up to an aha moment, in that we have finally located the Deep State. But then, it could just be another example of the Trump trait for exaggeration.

Much enjoyed this, Bill. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
    Thank you, Gloria
Comment from nomi338
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Backasward is one of my wife's favorite terms, I often wonder who she is referring to when she uses it. The other day she said "Listen stupid." she always calls me listen.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
    So when you hear, "Listen ? to me." She is calling you.
reply by nomi338 on 26-Apr-2024
    Okay. I will accept that.
Comment from royowen
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A very witty and well written script, following in a very popular genre at the moment in a presidential election year Bill, as always an excellent script. Well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
    Thank you, Roy.
reply by royowen on 26-Apr-2024
    Welcome Bill.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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I will need a guarantee that you are not involved in ballot counting this November. All of your ballow counting stories have me very concerned. Thanks for sharing, i think.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
    Ballot counting will be suspect from now on. It is the only way losers (Republicans) can be winners.
Comment from Mark Jackson
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Full of clever plays on words and puns. Very skillful writing. Sounds like the Crystal Maze game show catching the golden tickets crossed with the running man.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
    I changed the suggestion of democrats to republicans in the end. (Since it?s California)
reply by Mark Jackson on 26-Apr-2024
    lol
Comment from lyenochka
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I like your funny names based on Californian city names. Since California is more a blue state, I doubt they would chuck the Democrat-voting ballots. Hoping for no more accusations of election issues. I would have thought FOX News should be bankrupt after the lawsuit from Dominion.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
    I am just now seeing that BILLIONS is just a way to see if you are serious. Conservatives are so loaded, they offer a billion to each Republican who represents ? them.
reply by lyenochka on 26-Apr-2024
    I think because money talks is why we are stuck with the candidates we have. I am still hoping that the Republicans will be forced to scramble and come up with another candidate in the 11th hour.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
    CNN was doing the math on court dates and it looks like Trump will not be labeled a felon until he's president. He needs to be beaten at the polls, which of course, will be dragged on until Biden dies in office.
reply by lyenochka on 26-Apr-2024
    Sigh. I'm still praying it wont come to that.