What A Mess!
Making a mess when trying to impress3 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute and very well written poem you have penned for the contest. You used great descriptive words and very neat imagery from the artwork you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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This is a very cute and very well written poem you have penned for the contest. You used great descriptive words and very neat imagery from the artwork you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 27-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Mark Jackson
I know the chaos of cooking that is a regular occurrence; made worse by the stress of visitors. However, the final part was pure fantasy. Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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I know the chaos of cooking that is a regular occurrence; made worse by the stress of visitors. However, the final part was pure fantasy. Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from zanni
What a fun poem. It would make a great cartoon show. I like its length and of course, the humor that runs throughout. It is a great build-up, with an unexpected kindness at the end. It makes me think of Lucille Ball in I love Lucy and I suppose the woman having to cook and the 2 women cleaning up adds to the 50's vibe.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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What a fun poem. It would make a great cartoon show. I like its length and of course, the humor that runs throughout. It is a great build-up, with an unexpected kindness at the end. It makes me think of Lucille Ball in I love Lucy and I suppose the woman having to cook and the 2 women cleaning up adds to the 50's vibe.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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Thanks so much for the read and review!
