Poem From A Child
They are sweet.9 total reviews
Comment from Shirley Ann Bunyan
There is so much beautiful imagery in this poem from a child's point of view.
'The corn maze was much taller
Than little ol' me.
A little ladybug surprised me
By landing on my nose.'
A lovely, innocent walk in the woods. Thank you.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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There is so much beautiful imagery in this poem from a child's point of view.
'The corn maze was much taller
Than little ol' me.
A little ladybug surprised me
By landing on my nose.'
A lovely, innocent walk in the woods. Thank you.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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You are welcome.
Comment from Mark Jackson
Amidst the sensory delights of nature, the child pauses to reflect on their connection to something greater, expressing a tender moment of prayer and gratitude. This introspective interlude adds depth to the narrative, underscoring the child's spiritual awareness and sense of wonderment at the world around them.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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Amidst the sensory delights of nature, the child pauses to reflect on their connection to something greater, expressing a tender moment of prayer and gratitude. This introspective interlude adds depth to the narrative, underscoring the child's spiritual awareness and sense of wonderment at the world around them.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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Thanks
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
What a lovely free verse poem about Gods wonders. Photo is adorable oh how sweet. Such a beautiful little girl. Wishing you well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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What a lovely free verse poem about Gods wonders. Photo is adorable oh how sweet. Such a beautiful little girl. Wishing you well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
A beautiful entry for the Free Verse Poetry Contest. The poem sounds like its talking about things that a child might do or think in a day. The photograph is adorable and adds to the poems presentation. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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A beautiful entry for the Free Verse Poetry Contest. The poem sounds like its talking about things that a child might do or think in a day. The photograph is adorable and adds to the poems presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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You are right. Thanks.
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed reading your poem. I like how you put in things of nature and God. The little girl in the tree is a good choice for the poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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I enjoyed reading your poem. I like how you put in things of nature and God. The little girl in the tree is a good choice for the poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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Thanks for your kind words and good luck wishes.
Comment from nancyjam
This is a sweet poem from a child's point of view. The imagery is lovely and, of course, demonstrates the magical vision of children. they don't miss the beauty around us.
Best of luck in the contest.
Nancy
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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This is a sweet poem from a child's point of view. The imagery is lovely and, of course, demonstrates the magical vision of children. they don't miss the beauty around us.
Best of luck in the contest.
Nancy
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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Thanks so very much, Nancy.
Comment from gansach
This is a sweet poem, very descriptive, lighthearted, yet holding tender, serious moments, too. I enjoyed it very much. Good effort! Best wishes to you!
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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This is a sweet poem, very descriptive, lighthearted, yet holding tender, serious moments, too. I enjoyed it very much. Good effort! Best wishes to you!
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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Thanks so very much for your kind words.
Comment from Paul McFarland
I had to think on this one for awhile. I read it twice. I looked at the great picture. I thought of the effort that you put into this poem. I read the poem for a third time, then I gave you six stars.
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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I had to think on this one for awhile. I read it twice. I looked at the great picture. I thought of the effort that you put into this poem. I read the poem for a third time, then I gave you six stars.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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It must be great for you to give me six stars. It may have a chance to win something in the contest. I am honored that you gave me six stars. I changed it from what I originally wrote.
Comment from isabelteeth
Extremely extremely beautiful. My favorite poems are the ones which turn me into someone else, but this one doesn't need to do that- it tells me i still have that child inside of me. really nice
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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Extremely extremely beautiful. My favorite poems are the ones which turn me into someone else, but this one doesn't need to do that- it tells me i still have that child inside of me. really nice
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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Thanks, I still need to change the font size and bold it.
