Five sets halves, NSW Blues
Having a good depth of halves for the team2 total reviews
Comment from A.C. Goldman
It's not poetry and it is not very interesting prose, either. Does not sound inspired. Gives me no reason to care about the sport and I am not sure the writer cares either. I would start over and think of some way of writing it that makes me care.
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It's not poetry and it is not very interesting prose, either. Does not sound inspired. Gives me no reason to care about the sport and I am not sure the writer cares either. I would start over and think of some way of writing it that makes me care.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I liked reading this non-fiction piece about rugby and rugby players. I appreciated the time you took to help explain terms as well. The writing seems to flow well. It is always good to see how the other side of the world lives. Thank you for sharing.
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I liked reading this non-fiction piece about rugby and rugby players. I appreciated the time you took to help explain terms as well. The writing seems to flow well. It is always good to see how the other side of the world lives. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
