Vagrant of Fate
Outcomes and Fate2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your two lines do a wonderful job in sharing a dark mood. I feel the message and there is also a sense of depression. Nice word choices. This says a lot with so few words.
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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Your two lines do a wonderful job in sharing a dark mood. I feel the message and there is also a sense of depression. Nice word choices. This says a lot with so few words.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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Thank you for your kind comment.
Comment from Mark Jackson
Write an essence poem. This is a poem of two lines with six syllables per line, each containing an internal rhyme and an ending rhyme. Need I say more? TO be honest I did pretty much the same before entering the contest. Good luck with you re-write
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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Write an essence poem. This is a poem of two lines with six syllables per line, each containing an internal rhyme and an ending rhyme. Need I say more? TO be honest I did pretty much the same before entering the contest. Good luck with you re-write
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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Thank you so much!
