Three Syllable Casablanca
synopsis of the world's greatest film7 total reviews
Comment from BermyBye50
Jim,
Congrats on winning the Three by Four Poem Contest. Your poem perfectly summarized the story and theme of the movie. It is a perfect synopsis of a masterpiece of one of the greatest films in movie history.
All the best,
Eugene
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Jim,
Congrats on winning the Three by Four Poem Contest. Your poem perfectly summarized the story and theme of the movie. It is a perfect synopsis of a masterpiece of one of the greatest films in movie history.
All the best,
Eugene
Comment Written 04-May-2024
Comment from Sally Law
This is so fantastic, mystery poet. I voted for this then came back to review. Beautifully written and presented in this most difficult form.
My very best in the contest.
Sally Law :))
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This is so fantastic, mystery poet. I voted for this then came back to review. Beautifully written and presented in this most difficult form.
My very best in the contest.
Sally Law :))
Comment Written 01-May-2024
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
Nicely done poetic recap of the movie "Casablanca. I never saw it all the way through. But I would think everyone knows of the beach scene.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Happy May Day,.
Joan
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Hi
Nicely done poetic recap of the movie "Casablanca. I never saw it all the way through. But I would think everyone knows of the beach scene.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Happy May Day,.
Joan
Comment Written 01-May-2024
Comment from RJ Heritage
Has all the things that were asked for and it is a familiar theme. I also liked t he floww snd rhyme ofthe verses.
Well done Good luck in the contest.
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Has all the things that were asked for and it is a familiar theme. I also liked t he floww snd rhyme ofthe verses.
Well done Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2024
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the "three by four" contest entry. you did a good job, great topic. I watched "Casablanca", it's a wonderful movie... a classic.
I have a couple of suggestions:
the lines have to be 3 syllables long but you have a line with four syllables:
Be/cause of her = 4 syllables
I would add a summary of the story behind your poem. You give a lot of information and not everyone has watched the movie.
The famous saying, "Here's looking at you, kid" Casablanca is a Black-and-white film (1942) Starring, Humphrey Bogart and Ingrid Bergman, two historic Hollywood stars. It's an American romantic drama film. Filmed and set during World War II, it focuses on an American expatriate (Bogart) who must choose between his love for a woman and helping her husband, fight against the Germans.
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Excellent entry for the "three by four" contest entry. you did a good job, great topic. I watched "Casablanca", it's a wonderful movie... a classic.
I have a couple of suggestions:
the lines have to be 3 syllables long but you have a line with four syllables:
Be/cause of her = 4 syllables
I would add a summary of the story behind your poem. You give a lot of information and not everyone has watched the movie.
The famous saying, "Here's looking at you, kid" Casablanca is a Black-and-white film (1942) Starring, Humphrey Bogart and Ingrid Bergman, two historic Hollywood stars. It's an American romantic drama film. Filmed and set during World War II, it focuses on an American expatriate (Bogart) who must choose between his love for a woman and helping her husband, fight against the Germans.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
Comment from RodG
Casablanca is one of my all-time favorite films. I even have a framed poster. Your poem does a terrific job of summarizing the plot and introducing the main characters. I am not sure your rhyme always works, but I enjoyed the poem. Rod
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Casablanca is one of my all-time favorite films. I even have a framed poster. Your poem does a terrific job of summarizing the plot and introducing the main characters. I am not sure your rhyme always works, but I enjoyed the poem. Rod
Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
Comment from Bill Schott
This was a pretty darn good encapsulation of the famous story which O keep trying to get my wife to watch (over thirty years now) but can't seem to pin her down.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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This was a pretty darn good encapsulation of the famous story which O keep trying to get my wife to watch (over thirty years now) but can't seem to pin her down.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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In my humble years of experience, I've rarely known a female to really get interested in the movie.
