The Verdant Valleys
They are between the mountains.6 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and as well as the artwork you chose to go with it. It's a peaceful scene and the entry reflects that peace. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and as well as the artwork you chose to go with it. It's a peaceful scene and the entry reflects that peace. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellent poem. You give a Reader such imagery that is also displayed in your beautiful photo. I always look at the mountains that are around where we live, and I see the clouds topping them as well. That's such a good perspective to have in your writing. I enjoyed reviewing your good work.
Best wishes
Alex
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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This is an excellent poem. You give a Reader such imagery that is also displayed in your beautiful photo. I always look at the mountains that are around where we live, and I see the clouds topping them as well. That's such a good perspective to have in your writing. I enjoyed reviewing your good work.
Best wishes
Alex
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Thanks, Alex!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Poem contest. This is a beautiful poem and that picture is amazing. Where was it taken? I love mountains so much. Our New England mountains don't look like that. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Poem contest. This is a beautiful poem and that picture is amazing. Where was it taken? I love mountains so much. Our New England mountains don't look like that. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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I have no idea where it was taken. Thanks!
Comment from Teri7
Darla, This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the contest. You used great descriptive words. It was truly a six star poem in my eyes! Best wishes in the contest my friend! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Darla, This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the contest. You used great descriptive words. It was truly a six star poem in my eyes! Best wishes in the contest my friend! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Paul McFarland
That's a pretty good one, Darla. Also, that is a very nice picture. I think you live out there with those snow covered peaks. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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That's a pretty good one, Darla. Also, that is a very nice picture. I think you live out there with those snow covered peaks. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Thanks!
Comment from tempeste
Ciao!
I live in a valley so the topic is dear to me.
You need to still work on your poem.
NB: A valley is not under a mountain.
Valleys are low areas of land BETWEEN hills or mountains,
Do you have Pinterest on your PC , you can find gorgeous pics on that site.
You should at least try to find a picture without writing , it's distracting.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Ciao!
I live in a valley so the topic is dear to me.
You need to still work on your poem.
NB: A valley is not under a mountain.
Valleys are low areas of land BETWEEN hills or mountains,
Do you have Pinterest on your PC , you can find gorgeous pics on that site.
You should at least try to find a picture without writing , it's distracting.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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I fixed it.
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It is beautiful.
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Yes it?s beautiful .. 😍
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I thought maybe you would up your rating.
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I would have but like Tom explained to me two years ago you can upgrade a 2,3,4 up to a 5
but a 5 star review can not be upgraded to a 6
I would have but it doesn?t allow me ☹️
