Glitz and Glitter
A special key to happiness12 total reviews
Comment from Ulla
Hi Carol, first of congratulations on your third place. It's a sweet little story about the little bunny with his sparkling ears. And then the big surprise. Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
Hi Carol, first of congratulations on your third place. It's a sweet little story about the little bunny with his sparkling ears. And then the big surprise. Ulla xcx
Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Thanks, Ulla. Just a bit of amusement and fluff to "scare away" the ghosts that I've been hanging around with. Thanks so much for the kind comments.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Douglas Goff
Oh my goodness this would make a great cartoon. My kids used to watch stuff like this all the time.
Good luck in the competition. I think you may find yourself on the podium.
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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
Oh my goodness this would make a great cartoon. My kids used to watch stuff like this all the time.
Good luck in the competition. I think you may find yourself on the podium.
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Comment Written 21-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Thanks, Doug. I thought the silly flsh was colorful and filled with a bit of excitement... a surprise party and lots of glitter.
Thanks so much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from jessizero
This was such a cute, sweet story! You included the magical animal and the key as was required for the contest. I loved the explosion of glitter. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
This was such a cute, sweet story! You included the magical animal and the key as was required for the contest. I loved the explosion of glitter. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Thanks Jess...I so loved the colorful setting to lighten the day and of course, the surprise party with glitter exploding everywhere. Just a bit of fun with this one.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from joann r romei
Adorable, and the image at the end made me smile, everyone loves a surprise on their birthday or anytime for that matter, no errors noted and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
Adorable, and the image at the end made me smile, everyone loves a surprise on their birthday or anytime for that matter, no errors noted and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Thanks so much for reading this silly flash fiction and smiling at the surprise. Just a bit of fun to lighten our day!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Tough thing here to tell a story with but 50 words, but you seem to have accomplished such!! Never would have thought of such a creature... glitter indeed! Great job and thanx for sharing! Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
Tough thing here to tell a story with but 50 words, but you seem to have accomplished such!! Never would have thought of such a creature... glitter indeed! Great job and thanx for sharing! Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Thanks so much for taking the time to read this silly little 50 word flash. I thought the color pallet and the glitter would be fun for children to imagine. Appreciate your comments.
Comment from Wendy G
Very different, and a fun read in just a few sentences! The lesson is that things are not always what they seem - including bad things like feeling lonely .
Wendy
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
Very different, and a fun read in just a few sentences! The lesson is that things are not always what they seem - including bad things like feeling lonely .
Wendy
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
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Yes, a silly comical story to break the tension of the day. Can't do a lot with 50 words but make it colorful and hope you smile. Have a great day!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Magic 50 writing prompt. This was a fun story in only fifty words. It would make an excellent children's book character. The doll made to look like it could explode glitter everywhere. Kids would love it. Thaks for sharing. Good luck.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
An excellent entry for the Magic 50 writing prompt. This was a fun story in only fifty words. It would make an excellent children's book character. The doll made to look like it could explode glitter everywhere. Kids would love it. Thaks for sharing. Good luck.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Marilyn, for stopping by to read this silly flash fiction. I agree...the colorful bunny with exploding glitter ears would certainly make the children squeal with delight. Appreciate your kindness.
Comment from Bridge
I thoroughly enjoyed your story. Congratulations on getting a complete story in 50 words. I love the picture of the bunny too. I wish you the very best in the contest.
With kind regards
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
I thoroughly enjoyed your story. Congratulations on getting a complete story in 50 words. I love the picture of the bunny too. I wish you the very best in the contest.
With kind regards
Comment Written 19-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much for stopping by to read this little flash fiction fantasy. Just a little 50 word bit of fun.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from lancellot
Yes, fantasy, but I think this one is more of the children's fantasy category, that way, fewer questions would be asked by the younger readers. Looking at it, in that way this will work fine for small children.
Good work.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
Yes, fantasy, but I think this one is more of the children's fantasy category, that way, fewer questions would be asked by the younger readers. Looking at it, in that way this will work fine for small children.
Good work.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Good morning! Just a bit of silliness with 50 words and adding some light heartedness to a dreary day. Thanks for reading the contest entry and for your kind comments.
Have a great day!
Comment from FurryBunny
A heart warming tale for kids about a magical bunny who spreads joy and glitter at a surprise birthday celebration with his friends. Kids would absolutely love this story.
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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
A heart warming tale for kids about a magical bunny who spreads joy and glitter at a surprise birthday celebration with his friends. Kids would absolutely love this story.
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Comment Written 18-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
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Sorry it was only worth a four...but I agree it is difficult to put a full story in 50 words. At least, I hope it made you smile.
Have a great day!