Comment from patricia dillon

Excellent

I enjoyed your paean for the literate mouse. Also his mystical leanings were an original touch. I am glad to know he was not eaten by the cat. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024

Thank you.

reply by patricia dillon on 20-Apr-2024

You're welcome

Comment from Kelly Louisa Balliu

Excellent

I enjoyed all of the entries for this contest, but this one in particular made me think of Harry Potter learning about the dark arts. I was half expecting to see Snape behind my right shoulder..
I'm sure you'll do well in the contest. This one definitely looked like a fun write :-)

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024

Thanks so much!

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

Just the effort to post such a poem with time shorthanded, and for so few pesos, which by the way you reward the reading readers. idk
I'm just going with the flow to give you a review.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024

Thank you.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This was definitely a creative take on the mouse couplet contest. I love that he cast a sleeping spell on the cat. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024

Thanks so much!