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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Welcoming spring with a smile here Ricky and I liked your positive mood in your poem here. I hope you are keeping well, I enjoyed your post, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2024
    Thanks Dolly and enjoy your day.
    Doctor Ricky
Comment from jessizero
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I liked your use of the word "eye" to replace "I." I also liked your rhymes. Your picture ("Silly Old Me") was great. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
    Thanks for sharing this and have a wonderful day.
    Doctor Ricky
Comment from Mark Jackson
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Do you mean Eye reflect mean blindness? I can understand that if the eye reflects light rather than receives it it would mean blindness. At the moment you are telling me eye means blindness, but as far as I know that is not a definition of eye. Apart from the confusion and the superfluous information above the poem it is alright.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
    You don't understand my style of poetry.
    It's okay and thanks for the review.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by Mark Jackson on 17-Apr-2024
    I stole a car once; if by car, I mean apple, and by stole, I mean bought.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Yes, spring is here in all her glory. I enjoyed reading this poem. Thank you for sharing it with us. I know it's a surprise, but I couldn't find any way to improve it.

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
    Thanks again Barbara.
    Always a pleasure.
    Doctor Ricky
Comment from papa55mike
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It takes a lot of guts to put yourself out there. I couldn't do it and hate having my picture taken. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
    Thanks Mike and ugly tis my specialty!
    Doctor Ricky