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Lost Souls

A soulful moment in time

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Comment from patcelaw
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This is a very well worded two line poem for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a wonderful weekend and may God bless you with peace and happiness. Patricia .

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2024

Comment from RodG
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Great choice of artwork to accompany your two-liner.
The Speaker's euphemism for a suicide victim--Lost soul--evokes sympathy.
I like how you subtly used internal rhyme as well as end rhyme.
Rod

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2024